Shawn L. Bird

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query-Whatcha workin’ on? March 10, 2014

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:29 pm
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I seem to get this question a lot, so I thought I’d fill you in on the current Works In Progress.

1.  the blog.  Every day there’s a little something written just for you here, usually a poem.

2. my agent is currently pitching a YA novella about a teen boy called Kieran and his pregnant sister.  While I’m not doing anything with this, people are always asking what’s happening with this book, since it took me a long time to finish!

3. a companion novella about Kieran is completely drafted and ‘resting’

4. a companion novella about a friend of Kieran’s is completely drafted and ‘resting’

5. Book 3 in the Grace Awakening series is completely drafted, but is in need in revision.  It is ‘resting’ pending fresh eyes.

6. Book 4 in the Grace Awakening series is mostly drafted, but is in need of revision.  It is ‘resting’ as well.

7. I am actively working on a 40k word YA novel about date rape and cyber-bullying.

8. I have outlined a short YA novel about a drama class.

9. Grace Beguiling is sitting in the background ‘brewing.’  This is a prequel about one of Ben and Grace’s past lives together.

10. A novel about Finnish migrants in the Shuswap is also ‘brewing.

11. I have entered a couple of short story contests the last while.  Usually I just write something a couple of days before deadline, and hope for the best.  I don’t usually win these things, so that’s probably a sign I need to take a different tact! lol

An explanation of terms:

Brewing means I’m thinking about it.  I have some ideas and they come and go.  Sometimes it means I write out a scene or research something.  Very little is on paper in the brewing stage.

Outlining means I’ve planned out the bones of the whole story.  This strategy is new to me, and I’m not sure that I like it.  I find it spoils some of the fun of writing when I know what’s going to happen! On the other hand, I’m hoping there will be fewer scenes I need to cut because they don’t really fit, nor a need to re-work scenes to make them fit better.  Knowing the theme and being able to articulate each characters goals does keep things consistent and the writing focused.

Actively working means I’m writing a first draft, in the case of the current WIP, I’m following an very thorough outline.  (See outlining, above)

Draft means a completed  first (or possibly second, third, or fourth) version of a novel.  They’re always subject to massive amounts of revision.  Some people actively write one piece while they’re revising another piece (like Terry Brooks, who writes a new work in the morning and revises the last work in the afternoon).  I don’t.

Resting means the piece is finished, but on hiatus.  Or at least that I’m done with it for now.  Sometimes my wonderful editor has given me a list of revisions or challenging questions that I’m not quite ready to face.  If I’m too close in time to a project, it’s a little harder to see it critically, so I give it time while I work on something else.  When I come back to it, her  questions make perfect sense, and guide me to solutions.  Also, it can mean I wrote the draft, and my agent knows about it, and she’ll see if anyone is interested in it, and if so, I’ll polish it up.

And that’s what I’m up to these days!  (When I’m not reading or working at my day job, of course).

 

poem-grounded

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:06 pm
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Bald eagle

standing on turned over earth

Watching the cars go by on the highway

(or pretending to,

to give the small creatures

an illusion of safety).

Bald eagle

normally surveying

road and field from  high above

is checking out a new perspective.

I wonder whether he prefers

dirt to sky?

 

poem-spring melt March 9, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:54 pm
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The snow is melting!

I hear water tumbling like a waterfall

dripping into pool.

Cascading down my window blinds

puddling inside my door.

The snow is melting!

and I need a new roof.

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poem- trim time

Filed under: Poetry,poodles — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:06 am
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Your toe nails

echo in the hall like

a cavalcade of snare drums.

Thundering timpanic tribulation

of tip tapping echoing through my brain,

draining me of peace.

Your toe nails

four times four feet times two

(two square roots of feet)

Are a private percussion section

depriving me of sleep.

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I need to trim the dogs’ toe nails.

Arg.

 

poem- blinded March 8, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 3:22 pm
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Nearly 100 years old

Macular degeneration stolen sight

Ears failing

trapped in a blurry, muzzy world

When I am his age

will the genetics he passed along

place me in his world?

Will I be able to do what I love without sight or sound?

So I practice

typing this poem without my glasses.

Hoping for the best

like aging.

 

quote-Michèle Halberstadt on confidence

Filed under: Quotations — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:49 am
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Confidence is not a wilted plant that can be brought back to life with a bit of water.  It is a highly flammable object.  Doubt sets it aflame and destroys in irreparably.

 from Pianist in the Dark by Michèle Halberstadt (p. 30)

 

poem- quilting world March 7, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:29 am
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The lake is charcoal flannel serge

bound with an ermine edge

beneath a quilt batting sky.

 

 

poem- truth about pink shirts March 6, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:57 am
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On anti-bullying day

five students are in the office

for having a fist fight

in their pink shirts.

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I have a love/hate relationship with Anti-bullying Day.  First, because anything that’s ‘anti-‘ or ‘not’ the brain skips the adverb, and latches onto the verb- so they’ll see ‘bullying day’ as revealed in this poem.  I’d much rather the day promoted positive action than decrying negative action.  Say what you want to see.  Put those words out there: Be kind day!  Smile at a new kid day!  Bite your tongue before you speak day! etc.

Further to this, you might enjoy last year’s Pink shirt poem, which features Shane Koyzcan’s infamous “To This Day” poem/ youtube video

 

poem- march away! March 5, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:42 am
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Winter

marching

heavily through spring.

Winter

march

away,

and take

all this falling snow

with you.

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Heavy snow today, making the highway treacherous.  Fun drive to work.  We’re ready for less white and more warmth in the air!

 

poem-exploding you March 4, 2014

Filed under: Poetry,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:20 pm
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Oh, belligerent woman

at the gas station.

You know you are wrong.

You see the arrows.

Instead of backing up

You drive forward,

and make obnoxious remarks.

The other ten of us

can follow directions.

One of these things is not

like the others.

You’re embarrassed.

I get that.

So apologize, and back up.

Don’t yell at me.

I’m going the right way.

I am an author, though.

So while you rant,

I have the satisfaction

of seeing the bomb

the terrorists have set

that you accidentally trigger

by going the wrong way.

As your car explodes in a fiery

conflagration,

the ten cars that are secure

in our rule following

are protected by our bubble of sanctity.

We smile contentedly

knowing karma is at work,

as the litter of your dissatisfied life

rains from the sky,

bouncing off of us and

our aligned automobiles.

As you back out,

muttering a chastened,

“Sorry,”

I am glad that imagination

trumps aggravation

every time.

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It’s a popular saying, “Don’t mess with authors.  They will put you in their novels, and kill you.”  Today, I discovered the poetic equivalent. 😉