Curled up comma, figure in curly fur,
beside me, softly snoring,
my happy puppy dreams.
This is a KIMO poem. The kimo has a single image, no rhyme, 3 lines, with 10-7-6 syllable count.
poem-peaceful August 31, 2022
Tags: alliteration, assonance, consonance, imagery, kimo, poem, poetry, triplet
poem- empty the recycling August 30, 2022
Tags: alliteration, anger, consonance, domestic assault, end rhyme, poem, poetry, rhyme scheme, violence
Angry men are glass
When they shatter
Their shards slice:
they destroy what matters.
They cut up lives,
lose the love they amassed.
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poem- I saw a shooting star August 29, 2022
Tags: assonance, consonance, contrast, free verse, poem, poetry
I saw a shooting star
.
Last night
while letting out the dog:
a streak across the sky.
The dog squatted in the grass while
A weary traveler burned through our
atmosphere.
My upward glance made me a witness
and I must say, that meteor’s end
made midnight
magic.
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Poem- Cold Comfort pantoum August 24, 2022
Tags: alliteration, class, consonance, end rhyme, metaphor, pantoum, poem, poetry, poetry friday, rhyme, school, student, teacher, winter
COLD COMFORT
(by Shawn Bird and the 2021 En 11-A class)
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Something burns on a winter night
I smell the smoke and see the fire
Reflections on the snow are bright
The dreams to which I aspire
.
I smell the smoke and see the fire
What hopes linger in the dark
The dreams to which I aspire
Rise to the sky in flickering sparks
.
What hopes linger in the dark
Cradling cocoa in my hands
Rise to the sky in flickering sparks
My heart longs to dance
.
Cradling cocoa in my hands
Warm steam tickling my nose
My heart longs to dance
And waken my frost-bitten toes
.
Warm steam tickling my nose
The family encircles the flames
And waken my frost-bitten toes
Relaxing after winter games
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The family encircles the flames
Reflections on the snow are bright
Relaxing after winter games
Something burns on a winter night
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A pantoum is written in quatrain stanzas with lines 2 and 4 of each stanza repeating as lines 1 and 3 of the subsequent stanza until the last stanza, which circles back to the beginning, with line 2 being line 3 of the first stanza and line 4 being the first line of the poem. There are no rhythm rules so line lengths can vary. It is amazing how impactful this repetition proves to be.
If you try it, do post a link to your pantoum in the comment section!
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Crushed December 15, 2021
Tags: consonance, Covid, exhaustion, extended metaphor, mental health, metaphor, pandemic, stress, struggle
Beneath the rock slide
I lie gasping.
So many stones squashing
the life out of me,
Covid, isolation, tension,
anxiety in others,
illness, recent deaths,
responsibility, each a
pebble piled
until breathing seems
an impossibility.
Where is the safety crew
to clear the debris
so we can be well,
be free of despair,
be who we used
to be.
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poem-heavy December 4, 2020
Tags: assonance, consonance, literal, metaphor, poem, poetry, rhyme
What is this woodblock in my chest
beyond kilos and pounds to tons (or tonnes)?
Quivering, it vibrates my spine,
my foggy head,
all’s aching weight,
anguish and dread.
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poem- pandemic life December 2, 2020
Tags: assonance, consonance, exhaustion, internal rhyme, metaphor, pandemic, poem, poetry, triplet
It is a wearisome year
Each new day weighs heavier
than yesterday.
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poem- feeling beachy November 18, 2020
Tags: alliteration, assonance, beach, consonance, internal rhyme, onomatopoeia, poem, poetry
Crashing waves
Splashing children
Deep thinking trickles like sand
I’m seeking peace:
waves wash over me.
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Demo cinquain poem for class today. Kids chose theme of beach, and I wrote a line with a different poetic device in each: alliteration, assonance, consonance, onomatopoeia, internal rhyme. Turns out, it sounds better in reverse, so that’s the version you see here.
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poem-then they peeled back their faces November 5, 2020
Tags: alliteration, assonance, consonance, honesty, identity, mask, Masks, metaphor, poem, poetry, truth
then they peeled back their faces
Read this
you said to me.
I poured over words
with the focus of any girl
trying to impress her crush.
Oh, how the story spoke hidden horror!
Everyone in disguise.
No one revealing their true selves.
Forty years meditating on those masks.
2020! Society in masquerade!
Kindness, care, concern: all fake.
The true horror’s been revealed.
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poem- leaving the keys for the new owners October 15, 2020
Tags: assonance, change, consonance, grief, loss, metaphor, poem, poetry
The house echoes.
Drapes she made hang on the windows,
the last pieces of her here,
except
the lingering scent of bread baked
months ago, as
her last messages of appreciation,
her last independent acts.
