The distance does not change the feelings.
the reeling,
wheeling,
squealing of my soul,
no longer whole.
The space between us stretches
and in the distance you grow small
and old,
But time has folds
in dreams I hold
you close
My soul finds healing.
Though space and time change feelings,
you haven’t changed at all.
.
.
.
,
First line compliments of
Captain T @capt_blueson Twitter
Shawn L. Bird 
You write such beautiful poetry. Love your work.
Thank you.
I love it and agree …
Distance doesn´t change the way we feel.
Going further I would say that distance can turn the initial feeling into a more powerful one …
Cheers, Shawn; Aquileana 🙂
Indeed- and the power can come from imagination and dreams, rather than fact. 🙂
This is so beautiful. My heart in 14 tiny lines.
I’m glad you enjoyed it.
“But time has folds
in dreams I hold…”
I love the line.
Thanks
When it comes to emotions, distance is nothing. – Anon
Nothing and everything
i love this one..:)
I’m glad.
Interesting rhyme. Is this a specific form or is it your own?
No form, no regular rhyme or rhythm which means it’s a free verse.
I like it. Thanks for your reply.
I love it!
I’m glad
This. This, this, this. I cannot this this enough.
lol. Thanks.
Reblogged this on The Things We Do For Love.
you’re an amazing writer, and you capture everything so beautifully & simply. thanks for sharing, and thanks for following!
Thank you for the compliment!