Shawn L. Bird

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poem- distance does not change the feelings September 26, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:11 pm
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The distance does not change the feelings.

the reeling,

wheeling,

squealing of my soul,

no longer whole.

The space between us stretches

and in the distance you grow small

and old,

But time has folds

in dreams I hold

you close

My soul finds healing.

Though space and time change feelings,

you haven’t changed at all.

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First line compliments of

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22 Responses to “poem- distance does not change the feelings”

  1. macjam47 Says:

    You write such beautiful poetry. Love your work.

  2. Aquileana Says:

    I love it and agree …

    Distance doesn´t change the way we feel.

    Going further I would say that distance can turn the initial feeling into a more powerful one …

    Cheers, Shawn; Aquileana 🙂

  3. Patience Says:

    This is so beautiful. My heart in 14 tiny lines.

  4. edgarone2 Says:

    “But time has folds
    in dreams I hold…”
    I love the line.

  5. Svelte Says:

    When it comes to emotions, distance is nothing. – Anon

  6. Interesting rhyme. Is this a specific form or is it your own?

  7. emberyn Says:

    This. This, this, this. I cannot this this enough.

  8. mazal1987 Says:

    you’re an amazing writer, and you capture everything so beautifully & simply. thanks for sharing, and thanks for following!


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