Shawn L. Bird

Original poetry, commentary, and fiction. All copyrights reserved.

micro-poem-affirmative August 10, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:15 am
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Positively

Indubitively

Yes

 

poem-fickle August 9, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:41 pm
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Weather,

when in Calgary

changes her clothes

with the dizzying

rapidity of a thirteen year old

trying to figure out

what to wear to the school dance,

then rushes off

leaving chaos in her wake.

 

 

poem-there

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 3:30 am
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There

in that alley

was the beginning

of dreams

of possibility

of wishes.

There

in that alley

was where imagining

became the tool

for all that was to be.

There

in that alley

was the first place

I was me.

 

poem-scribble August 8, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:09 am
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This unending line

describes a metaphor for life,

our unending spinning through

the routines of daily life,

dark moments where we’ve

gotten stuck in a groove,

and there,

where it leaves the paper,

departure for

another plane.

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(This might be fun to try as a shape poem)

 

poem-missing August 7, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:38 pm
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Three thirty-three in the morning

I awaken, drenched in sweat.

I turn on the fan,

waiting for sleep to return

wishing that you were beside me.

 

haiku-happiness

Filed under: Poetry,poodles — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:51 am
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I love to see your

tail wagging happily

in your doggy dream

 

poem-lampstand August 6, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:34 pm
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I walk through my

childhood neighbourhood.

Just because,

I lean against the lamp post

I held up every morning

in grade seven

as I waited for the bus.

Different weather

but always too

early in the morning.

More rusty,

it hummed

a greeting

remembering

(or maybe

that was me).

 

poem-the switch

Filed under: Poetry,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 4:45 am
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Trying to type
Fingers feel
unattached to hand.
Eyes blur.
Stomach rocks
Head dull.
It’s so hard
to rejoin
the diurnal world
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Thursday I have to be in a workshop at 8 a.m. my time.  I need to be alert and absorbing information.  I’ve been going to bed between 4 and 7 a.m. the last few nights, working through the greatest heat.  My plan was to start last Friday, moving back an hour each night, but it didn’t work.  It was 4:30 on Sunday and 3:30 on Mon, despite pharmaceutical aid.  (I can stay up for hours after sleeping pill.  My body relaxes, but my brain just keeps plugging along…)  Wish me luck getting to bed at midnight tonight, with all my packing and preparations in order!
Yawn
 

poem-broken August 5, 2014

Filed under: anecdotes,Poetry,poodles — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:33 pm
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We don’t appreciate

comfort

until the air conditioner

condenser breaks when it’s

40 degrees* out

because dog pee

corroded the evaporator coil.

The steaming

house is broken

and dogs get more expensive

every day.

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*(that’s 104 if you speak Fahrenheit).

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(good thing we love them, eh?)

 

 

 

lyrics-Skye Boat Song

Filed under: OUTLANDERishness,Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:15 pm
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My Outlander theme lyrics to Skye Boat Song:

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Called through the stones and carried ‘cross time

Voyaging far from home

All she has known is gone and she roams

Lost beneath Scotland’s pines.

Centuries part

Where is her heart?

Two hundred years away

Two men to love

Prayers to above

Whose love will she betray?

Carried through time, she’s called through the stones

Where will she make her home?

Highland wars loom

they’re leading to doom

Destiny knows its own 

 Centuries part

Where is her heart?

Two hundred years away

Two men to love

Prayers to above

Whose love will she betray?

Third verse, harp only

Repeat chorus with harp to end.

(c) Shawn L. Bird

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Starz has released the first episode of Outlander, and with it, Bear McCreary’s theme song based on The Skye Boat Song.

I might be going against the current here, but I really don’t like those lyrics  Horrendous.  Grammatically cringeworthy.  I mean seriously, “Say could that lass, be I”  ARGGGGGGGGG!!!  It hurts me.  It really does.  Not to mention they’ve stuck “Skye” in there, and Claire never goes to Skye in the books.  He has feminized Robert Louis Stevenson’s lyrics to the tune, I understand, but there was no need to do that.

I’m willing to put my money where my mouth is when I complain about something, so here is a poem that fits with the tune of the Skye Boat Song and also reflects the story of Outlander.  What’s more, I think it is a better fit for the romantic tone and the essential conflict of the story.  Nothing about Skye, and the grammar is correct.

If Starz wishes to replace their lyrics for the next season, I am delighted to offer these.  Feel free to send them a link and encourage the idea! 😉  If you’re from Starz, you can find my agent is listed on my About page.  Drop her a line, she’ll be delighted to negotiate something.

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Blooper lines:

Centuries part

Where is her heart?

Will she get back to Frank?

Though she is torn

Jamie she’ll mourn

but he is known to spank

PS.  I made a video of myself singing and playing the harp (I’ve never been coordinated enough to do that before!  How exciting!)  The dogs got up and left the room, their ears twitching on the high notes.  I listened to the video and apologized to them.  Plainly, G is not my key.  Yikes! So, while I assure you that this works beautifully, I may have to learn it in another key before I try to demonstrate .  😉  In the meantime,  click to play on the video, then scroll up to sing along yourself.  Hopefully G is YOUR key. 😉

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