Shawn L. Bird

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poem- overheard April 23, 2018

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:00 am
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He’s just not that into you

The world is large and full of fish

swimming through plastic

bread bag jellyfish by the belly full

Walk, don’t run!

Dead man’s float

Be a Star fish, children!

I can make you a star, baby!

Grow a limb

Waggle pseudopods

False feet

Steppin’ out with my baby

Can’t go wrong, when it’s this right

Mr. Right’s all wrong again

Really,

the problem is

She’s just not into him,

Move on!

How much is that doggy in the window?

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NaPoWriMo prompt for today is to write a poem that sounds like it’s meant to be spoken aloud.  The examples were constructed with juxtaposition of original words with snippets of commonly heard things, sayings, song lyrics, conversations, etc.

 

 

 

 

 

poem- hockey night at our house April 20, 2018

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 4:44 pm
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I turn on the TV:
Hockey commentary.
I am ten again.
Dad’s in the family room.
Whooping
Groaning
Arguing with the ref.
I feel a rush of nostalgia.
Turn the channel.

 

poem- rebellious

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:37 am
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It’s 4 20 on Poetry Friday.

Half my class is missing.

Are they taking the day off to celebrate

with a joint?

The rest of us are celebrating poetry,

writing to prompts, savouring

chocolate caramel cupcakes

and cheesecake brownies

(not THOSE kind of brownies).

We’re clean living poets,

saving rebellion

for after school.

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#Napowrimo prompt today was “Rebellion”

 

Writing-Is Norton Edwards an anti-hero? April 19, 2018

On a radio interview this week, I was asked about crafting anti-heroes, with the sub-text that Norton Edwards, the eponymous character of Murdering Mr. Edwards, is one.  I responded in a vague, general way, but I’ve been pondering more about this, so here is the extended answer to the question!  (It’s so much better when an interviewer tells you questions in advance, and you can put such thought into a response before it’s broadcast to the masses!)  :-S

So, here are my “Thoughts on crafting the anti-hero.”

I don’t think of Mr. Edwards as the protagonist of the tales, so he is not an anti-hero by the normal definition of the term: a protagonist lacking heroic qualities of nobility, morality, and courage (etc). I think of the staff as the protagonists of their individual tales, with Edwards as the antagonist in each.

Of course, Edwards is the protagonist of his own life, but he would certainly not think of himself as an anti-hero either.  He sees himself as the romantic lead.  He believes he is dashing, fascinating, handsome and absolutely heroic in his pursuit of intelligent discourse against the apathy and ignorance of society.  He imagines he is a great leader, inspiring the youth to connect to the great glories of literature.  He sees in himself all the heroic qualities.

He’s right, too.

He is all those things.  But just because he is charming and romantic when it suits him, does not mean that he is not also obnoxious, oblivious, and cruel.  He behaves abominably to the women he entrances each school year. He has unsavory habits.  In other words, Edwards, like most people, has negative qualities that he ignores or minimizes in the greater glory of his identity as hero of his own story.

As an anti-hero (if you must call him that) of the entire book, he is boring, pompous, and self-centred.  No one is cheering for Edwards in these stories.  We recognize him in the most irritating people we’ve ever worked with.  He’s a pathetic creature to the outside world, but he is content in his own class room demesne, well satisfied with his role as benign dictator (or minor nobility, if you prefer) over the students in his purview.  He is deluded about his nobility of purpose and his principles, but he is content.

In Murdering Mr. Edwards, this disconnect becomes the central conflict Edwards has between himself and each of the other members of the Canterbury High staff.  He is oblivious to how he is perceived by others, and if he were aware, he would discount their perception as foolishly, ignorantly, incorrect.

I was asked how one crafts an anti-hero.  My answer after consideration remains the same as I gave in the interview.  You craft an anti-hero as you craft everything else in a book.  You write the story in your head and then you edit to ensure what you see in your head matches what’s on the page.  In a larger work, If you craft your characters well, they are complex creatures whose positive and negative qualities cause conflict within the reader.  Even as they dislike the antagonist, they may find themselves feeling sorry for them, recognizing their fallible humanity.  We see some redeeming qualities.

After all, in the real world, we don’t actually murder those annoying co-workers, do we?

 

poem: The Game April 16, 2018

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:33 pm
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He serves: I’m working late

She returns: Sounds good. I think I’ll go out, myself

He lobs: Who are you going with?

She returns: Why does it matter?

He stretches, just manages: You might be in an accident.  I should know where to look.

She returns to the far corner: So I can stop into the office and see you this evening?

He turns too slowly, can’t reach far enough: Uh.

Zero love.

 

#NaPoWriMo prompt 16 about a game.

(Still writing poems that connect with my current novel writing project)

 

poem- at last April 12, 2018

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:13 am
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At last

you are shedding the neutral grey and white,

wrapping yourself in a green gown,

sparkling with iridescent dew

tumbling like velvet

into a glassy pool

still ice cold,

quivering on the brink.

Hear the promise:

morning chorus, finches singing

their hopeful hearts to spring.

 

#haibun (I hope!) for #NaPoWriMo Day 12

I’ve never tried a haibun before.  I hope I’ve caught the sense of them.

 

poem-vital April 11, 2018

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:55 am

Make things.
Bring nothingness into vitality
Be a creator

 

poem-mercy April 9, 2018

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:07 pm
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It’s a mercy, they say

nodding sagely.

Mercy it may be,

but I’m seeking grace,

for mercy does not

alleviate grief.

 

 

TWO days until release! April 8, 2018

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:27 pm

 

We interupt the regularly scheduled poetry to announce that there are only TWO days before the release of Murdering Mr. Edwards!

If you would like to join our push to send it into the Amazon best seller ranks, please buy on release day: April 10, 2018.

If not, you can purchase any time you like with my thanks! 🙂

Amazon links:

Amazon.co.uk

Amazon.com

Amazon.ca

Also available other places, of course.  If you enjoy it, please leave an online review and tell your friends!

Shawn Bird MME promo

 

 

 

poem-next

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:30 am
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This moonlit night,

snow glowing with

luminescent memories,

I stroll along the old paths

thinking of the mystery you

made of me.

Identity molded like play dough

childhood laughter

leaching from the cracks of yesterday.

I can’t say anymore

who I am.

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(another character perspective poem about Lydia & Dustin)