Shawn L. Bird

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poem-pleating June 10, 2014

Filed under: Friendship,Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:01 am
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Time has pleats.

While years may stretch them out.

They enfold when old friends

meet after years,

touching as if only

hours have passed.

 

 

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32 Responses to “poem-pleating”

  1. mihrank Says:

    Poetry is life’s sonnets

    Sung in tunes of the beating heart

    Through pleating words of wisdom

    Into a lace of pearls

    Every kind of poetry

    May be romantic; idealistic; realistic

    Thus;

  2. lerealtalk Says:

    This is beautiful. So touching. Great imagery, rhythm and incredibly easy to relate. 🙂

  3. Kip Says:

    Probably the most beautiful physics lesson I’ve ever read!

  4. wbdeejay Says:

    profound poetry!

  5. I love this ! I love how everyone can relate with this. Lovely imagery X

  6. Ginz Says:

    What a beautiful description 🙂

  7. toad2015 Says:

    The touch of time, hours upon hours have not passed…

  8. 89blogs Says:

    Great description!

  9. Elouise Says:

    Beautiful and timely–with a 50-year college class reunion coming up this fall!
    Elouise

  10. J Forest Says:

    Reblogged this on Beatnik Flop and commented:
    What a great metaphor for the phenomena of when two really great friends can meet after years – decades even – and pick up where they left off as if the long absence never existed.

  11. Literally hugged my computer just now.

  12. […] but so much remains the same whenever you meet old friends, doesn’t it?  (It’s that ‘time has pleats’ thing […]

  13. Wow Shawn! Short and sweet. I loved it!


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