Shawn L. Bird

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worth her weight in gold? September 10, 2012

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 6:41 pm
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I mentioned to my En 12 class today that a good editor is worth her weight in gold.  Then, remembering that gold is over $1000 an ounce, I realized I surely am not paying adequately for my editing services.  I decided I’d better calculate it out.

Gold is $1690 Canadian (FYI that’s $1770 US) per ounce today, Sept 10,2012.

There are 16 ounces in a pound.

Round number of 200 lbs  body weight multiplied by 16 is 3200 ounces.

3200 ounces multiplied by $1690 gold price  is approximately $5.4 million.

Plainly, until book sales improve dramatically, I can no longer afford an editor.

 

heart pounding contest entering September 9, 2012

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:04 am
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My heart is pounding as if I’d just been running a race.

Was I?

No.

All I did was push “Send.”

I find it interesting, in a curiously analytical way, that one little finger drop, a quarter inch of movement, can cause such palpitations.

The last time I felt like this, I was dropping a manuscript into the mail.

And so I am again, I suppose.

A short story is off to a Big Contest.

Big as in:  Famous judges.  Serious cash.

This is the kind of contest that

has professionals entering:

the ‘in some circles rather famous’

kind of professionals.

I’m joining the game, and now begins the wait.

How close to their skill am I?

Will my entry wallow in the  ‘not quite there’ pile

or shine in the ‘consider this’ pile?

I’ve done all that I can do.

It’s gone,

and my heart pounds a tattoo of farewell.

Now we wait

to see which possibility

unfolds.

 

publishing process by Nathan Bradford… August 29, 2012

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 7:32 pm
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Here is a very entertaining, gif filled blog post by Nathan Bradford about the publishing process.   Aside from all the rejections cited, I can relate to this!   (I only had 2 agent rejections before Grace was signed by the first publisher queried).

 

 

 

help guys! I need some male vocab! August 4, 2012

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:38 pm
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I was once told, “Guys don’t say ‘cute.'”  That’s a problem, because I’m editing Grace Awakening Myth, and Ben thinks ‘cute’ and ‘adorable’ rather frequently.  If I need to kill the word cute, but somehow get the same idea across, what words should I use?

What do you say when the girl you adore is so uncoordinated around you she can barely walk?  When she blushes whenever she sees you?

When I was that girl, I remember a lot of knowing grins, and I’ve got that, but what word would be in his head to describe his affectionate amusement?

Help!  Please leave your suggestion in the comments below!  Thanks!

 

How to write a book in 6 weeks August 2, 2012

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:23 pm
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My first thought when I saw this title of a Bookbaby blog was, “You sit down and keep typing!”  While this is definitely true, Beth Haydn’s guest blog has some other contributions.  🙂  Go check her  How to Write a Book in Six Weeks over at Bookbaby.

 

 

inspiration August 1, 2012

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:16 pm
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I have been asked to do a reading and discuss the inspiration behind my writing with a group of seniors.  That has me pondering a bit.

I have a lot of inspirations.  There’s a common “be careful or I’ll put you in my novel” sort of thing with novelists.  It’s true that there are several plot elements that reflect events going on around me.

For example, when my Communications 12 class was regaling me with some of their more foolish adventures, they described the infamous time that one of them had leapt from the top floor down into the open atrium below- some 20 feet.  That  became a scene in the book.  An evil character leapt to attack Grace.  At the end of the semester when they convinced me to read it to them, the young man in question laughed and shouted, “That’s EXACTLY what happened!” even though I had merely taken the fact of the jump, and imagined how it would play out.

One scene happens at a wedding.  The events described are true.  I attended that wedding, and experienced that strange radar.  The context of the event is different, as it fits into the story to explain something about a character.

Of course, I’ve already explained to you the germ of truth behind the concert scene.

Then there is the whole use of mythology, which came after reading Stephenie Meyer’s Twilight series, and realising that  incorporating mythology solved all my plotting  issues.

What about the inspiration to actually sit down to write?  That was that niggling saying, “Those who can, do.  Those who can’t, teach.”  That aphorism has ticked me off for years.  Finally I thought, “Well then, I guess I’d better ‘do’ and prove it wrong!”

So many inspirations!

  • personal experiences
  • stories from others
  • desire

To be honest though, there is something more than all of that.  It’s as if the characters needed to live, and they asked me to record their voices.  They came into my breath and became part of my world.

 

 

 

sex scenes July 24, 2012

Filed under: OUTLANDERishness,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:16 am
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I have been writing a brand of YA that leaves sex scenes safely out of the picture, and firmly entrenched in the reader’s imagination.  But eventually the time will come (reasonably soon in the process of writing Grace Beguiling, I think!) when I will have to write a real scene involving sex, and I can only hope that I will do it as well as Outlander author Diana Gabaldon does.  I will be following her advice from this article, because Diana Gabaldon is a master of honest, well-crafted, realistic, brilliantly steamy sex scenes!

 

beginnings July 23, 2012

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 3:15 pm
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I met with my editor last weekend.  She was feeling a little grumpy.  There are so many new characters, both mythic and modern, in Grace Awakening Myth, she was trying to find something to grab at the beginning of the story to put them into context of Dreams, and she hadn’t.  She offered some suggestions.  Essentially, I needed to go back and start the book a little earlier than it does in the parallel story (Grace Awakening Dreams). I came home and wrote the prescribed scenes thinking ‘I need to more clearly establish the main conflict’ for the reader and ‘I need to grab the reader right away.’

I wrote a couple scenes and sent them off to her, wondering if I needed something with more action at the very start, and pondering how I was going to put it in there.  I hadn’t come to a decision yet.

What I call the “James Bond Method” of starting a work, is the leap into the action, immediately.  It’s common way to start action films or spy novels.  Sometimes this is an intense prologue of a scene that will be explained at the end of the book.  I had in mind that I had to somehow make that fit the beginning of Grace Awakening Myth, but I couldn’t figure out how I was going to make it work.

This morning I was reading through Tweets by agent Victoria Marini and she had posted a link to a blog by agent Kristin Nelson on this very issue.  Nelson argues that while the beginning has to grab the reader, it doesn’t have to be by ACTION, though the scene must still be ACTIVE.  Good stuff here, including clear examples.  The ‘active’ one seems definitely superior.    Check it out action vs active here.

Whew.  I’m on the right track, after all. 🙂

 

July 18, 2012

Filed under: Literature — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:24 pm
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“Writing is not like painting where you add. It is not what you put on the canvas that the reader sees. Writing is more like a sculpture where you remove, you eliminate in order to make the work visible. Even those pages you remove somehow remain” – Elie Wiesel

I have have read Wiesel’s book Night, which is thin, and yet packs a far more powerful punch than many fat works.  For non-fiction, his quote is clearly true:  what you leave out is as significant as what’s left in.  For fiction, however, when everything has to be put in from the author’s imagination, a whole world must be created.  There is no rock to take away from.  There is only dirt, which must be formed into being, like men formed from clay.

 

everything in an instant July 15, 2012

Filed under: Commentary,Reading,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 6:32 pm
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“Everything that ever has been and everything that ever will be happens in an instant.”

Brian Keaney in The Cracked Mirror p. 15

 In an instant, everything changes.  You meet eyes with a stranger.  The baby is born.   The car swerves into your lane.  You make the phone call.  You send the email.  You drop the manuscript in the mail.  The child dashes into the street.  The news arrives.  A letter arrives.

Whether it’s real life or whether it’s fiction, in an instant, everything changes.  What happens next?  How you choose to respond creates the next chapter of the story.

In an instant, everything has changed.  What’s next?