I’ve been working on a book of high school poetry units this summer. I’ve been adapting lessons I’ve used for years. I had to write a lot of poems as examples for all the poetry forms (since I don’t have permissions to publish other people’s work). I wrote this Ottava Rima, but decided its tone was too negative to include in the book. I wrote a second Ottava Rima using all the same rhymes that is poetry positive, but I thought you might enjoy this one. 🙂
Ottava Rima form requires:
8 lines
iambic pentameter
rhyme scheme ABABABCC
Teacher Woe Some get to choose if they should write a poem
I am zipped up in Daddy’s green sweater. Mom knitted, purled, cabled together some semblance of love. He wore it with joy almost every day, telling all admirers how it was made with love. It’s wrapped around me, but it’s not his firm arms, not his smell (which wasn’t peppermint or aftershave, but just him), not his whisper in my ears, Love you so much. How can another year have past without him? How can a sweater be both so full and so bereft of him?
Purpleair.com reports our air quality has improved today. We’re down to 389 from 450s (out of 500) earlier in the week. Still “extremely hazardous.” Wildfires are most unpleasant, particularly where valleys converge and smoke from several fires gathers. The smoke is visible in the street and yards. 254 active fires in our province, over 40% of them out of control. 4 large fires in our local region. Thousands of people evacuated or on alert. Hoping for a weekend of lightning-less rain to wash the sky and allow for deep breaths again!Our lovely 30 degree Celsius summer is wasted when one can’t be outside.