Shawn L. Bird

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poem- Sochi shivers February 18, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:04 pm
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Snow falling outside the window

Snow falling on the venues at Sochi

While I watch winter,

I dream of hot water:

Olympic bath time.

(They don’t offer a medal for shivering

and that’s my best winter activity).


26 Responses to “poem- Sochi shivers”

  1. piyushpujara Says:

    Lovely Poem. πŸ™‚

  2. poetatete Says:

    LOL – mine too – I wrote haiku recently based on the same idea.

  3. poetatete Says:

    Ha-ha! I wrote haiku recently using this same idea.

  4. M. Zane McClellan Says:

    Very cute, Shawn. πŸ™‚

  5. fromthatweirdlittleplace Says:

    I wish it was snowing here but instead we just get a lot of bush fires :/

  6. redgladiola Says:

    Love the humor in those last two lines. Great work!

  7. MW Moore Says:

    Very touching (a touch of pneumonia?).

  8. coalkissed Says:

    This made me smile πŸ™‚ if you dream of hot water does that mean you don’t have any?!? I hope it!

  9. I am feeling cold . . . Brrrr!

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