
Here’s a wonderful opportunity for you. Support Rochester Minnesota Women’s Shelter by purchasing beautiful jewellery themed on the Three Graces designed by Carole Kent-Kirckof. I just bought a bracelet. Lovely stuff.

Here’s a wonderful opportunity for you. Support Rochester Minnesota Women’s Shelter by purchasing beautiful jewellery themed on the Three Graces designed by Carole Kent-Kirckof. I just bought a bracelet. Lovely stuff.
And now, for something completely different…
Pas de Deux of Orpheus and Euridike from the much acclaimed ‘timelapse/(Mnemosyne)’ created by choreographer David Dawson for Dutch National Ballet (2011)
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I’ve been hearing about Pinterest, so I decided to take a look. It seems like fun, so I’ve got a profile going there. My boards are about the places and spaces that I love (like my own backyard), people I admire (so far only authors, but if I think, I know I’ll come up with more. At the moment I am so obsessed with Diana Gabaldon I’m having trouble seeing past her! lol), and books I love.
After that, I jumped into author mode, and Grace has a board, as well as Ben and Auntie Bright.
Have a look around at Pinterest.com/ShawnLBird. Feel free to offer some suggestions!
Sometimes, just being is powerful.
I remember when I was in grade eleven, one of our graduating students, Randy Lawrence, won a play writing competition with a play entitled, “Don’t Just Do Something, Stand There!” It’s a clever twist on the epigram, “Don’t just stand there, do something!” It’s not true that any action is better than inaction. As Lawrence suggests in this title, sometimes, it the best course of action to wait patiently.
In fiction, a passive character is a boring character. Critics tend to like “strong characters” and it is certainly true that a character prone to doing ‘something’ (when perhaps ‘standing’ is the better idea) will get himself into far more interesting adventures. I understand that.
There’s been the odd reviewer who finds Grace excessively passive. It’s certainly true that Grace receives action and is forced to react more than she instigates action. She is not the feisty heroine who’s out to put all wrongs right right from the very beginning. She is a quiet person who just wants a peaceful existence. Truth be told, she should be a boring person. She’d love to be a boring person, with boring experiences to recount. Unfortunately, there are those who won’t let her have her boring life. She is forced to deal with the destiny she has been given, just like the rest of us.
So she’s not actively pursuing her destiny. To be honest, this makes her like 95% of the people I know, 90% of the time. Occasionally things shake us up, but most of the time, we don’t set ourselves up for much excitement. We make good choices. We play it safe. We survive to live another day.
Like us, Grace isn’t an adventure seeker. She’s a victim of circumstance, though. Grace has to learn why things are always ‘happening to her’ before she can face it down. She spends some time grumbling about it. You know people like that, don’t you? The ones who whine that their life is so unfair. You can usually point to the flaw in their character or the specific choice that led them into their circumstance. That’s the lesson that Grace (and the reader) has to learn. We are the one common denominator in all our life experiences. We carry our hamartia. So whether we ‘deserve’ our fate or not, some essence of our being has often led to it. We are still an element of it. Like Grace, our passivity may be our power, but sooner or later, it must be resolved.
When I crafted Grace, I wanted the reader to identify with her. I wanted them to share in her confusion, and imagine themselves in her experiences. That’s the reason there is no physical description of Grace anywhere. When I ask readers how they visualize Grace, they invariably describe a version of themselves. Most of the students I know have outside forces controlling their lives. Parents, schools, and/or teams govern their time and responsibilities. They can relate to Grace receiving action, rather than causing it, and they’re the ones I wrote for.
Josh says it best, “Be.”
You know, Latin fascinates me. I remember a verse in an autograph book I once had, “Latin is a dead language it’s plain enough to see. It killed off all the Romans, and now it’s killing me.” I never had the opportunity to study Latin, but I have studied French, Spanish and Italian at various degrees of seriousness, and so I make a lot of connections between Latin root words in those Roman languages, and of course in English as well.
Take the word “iugo” for example. It doesn’t have just a couple meanings, as would be likely if it was an English word. Iugo covers a concept rather thoroughly. Consider that it means,
JOIN
JOINT
JOIN TOGETHER
BIND TOGETHER
LINK
BAND
CONNECT
INTERLACE
INOSCULATE
INTERLOCK
MATE
YOKE
COMMINGLE
WED
UNITE
PAIR
COMPOUND
MARRY
CLASP
AGGREGATE
HARNESS
CONFLATE
BRIDGE
FUN
COUPLE
PAN
COMPACT
AGGLUTINATE
LARK
RALLY
COMPLECT
AMALGAMATE
CONJOIN
LEASH
kind of profound isn’t it? Someday maybe I’ll really study Latin, but in the meantime, I’ll enjoy the Google translator and make the best of it.
Oh, if you’re trying figure how this connects to Grace Awakening, Iugo is the surname of Concordia in the books. Concordia is the Roman goddess of marital harmony. (I’ve told you before all the names in your books are chosen for a reason…)
I waved franticially as the glowing horses approached, “Eos! Slow down!”
“I don’t have time for you, O!” she called back, raising the reins and snapping them.
“Just make some room on the chariot. Come on.”
“You’ll add stress to the horses.”
I raised my eyebrows and she glanced away with a dramatic sigh. “Fine. Get on.” She shuffled over a bit.
I leapt up and squeezed beside her. The chariot was only made for one. We were uncomfortably close.”
“What is it?” Herbreath was soft, with a faint tinge of coriander.
“I was wondering…”
“I’m not slowing down for you,” she broke in.
“I didn’t ask you to!”
She sighed. “It’s the only thing anyone ever asks me. I’m not stupid. You want me to slow down a day:”
“That’s not what I want.” I met her eyes, bouncing slightly with the movement of the horses. “I thought I could help you out. I wondered if you needed a break.”
“A break?” She studied me suspiciously. “What do you mean ‘a break’?”
“A break. A day off. A chance to get off the back of this chariot to do something you want to do.”
Her eyes grew large. “Seriously?”
I nodded. “You work so hard. You deserve a break.”
“When?”
“When would you like to get away?”
“Tomorrow?” she whispered wistfully.
“Sure. I’ll take the day off school. I’ll meet you at five?”
“Perfect.” She sighed happily, her golden eyes twinkling. This will be fantastic. Is there anything I can do for you while I’m off?”
I tried to look guileless. “Oh. Um. Well, if you have a chance, would you pop in to see Morpheus?
“Oh sure! I never get to spend any time with him. That’d be great. Do you have a message for him?””
Crystal Stranaghan was the publisher at Gumboot Books who signed Grace Awakening. Sadly, Gumboot is no more, but Crystal is still involved in writing and all sorts of other projects. In this blog post, she writes about feeling guilty about finding time for writing.
I am thoroughly impressed by Diana Gabaldon who says she writes every day. Good thing, considering how huge her books are, and how desperate her fans are for her to finish them! I know that a little work every day adds up quickly, but I also know how difficult it is to carve out time to do the work. Gabaldon posts ‘daily lines’ almost every day on her website and Facebook, so it appears to be true.
She is juggling a few different projects, but there is a little snippet of writing from something to feed the fans.
I seem to find time for the blog, but it takes a little more effort to fit in the novel work. The most words seem to fill my brain just as I’m about to drop off to sleep. This is not always conducive to adequate rest, I confess.
Crystal says she feels guilty for taking the time to write. By contrast, I feel guilty for not writing! ;-P I know when I am working on a novel, I am making an investment that will pay off in the future.
How about you? Are you guilty for writing or for not writing? How do you carve time to write in your day?
Happy news! I have been assured that by the end of the Easter weekend, Grace Awakening Power WILL be back for final final final view before release to press!
Dare I hope?
Fingers crossed!
This is how I’m feeling:
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Yeah. I know.
Originally I had posted that Grace Awakening Power would be released in November.
Next I posted it would be out in January.
At the moment the website says “It’ll be out in February,” but it’s now April, so clearly that’s wrong, as well.
What’s the hold up? Don’t look at me! ;-P The manuscript has been with the editor since the summer. I expected it back by the fall so Lintusen could have it out by the end of the year 2011. Plainly I was wrong.
I don’t think there are that many mistakes in it, but I guess the day job is interfering with the editing job. I’ve been trying to be patient, since nothing in the publishing world moves quickly or smoothly. I haven’t been in the business long, but I learned that within the first year.
Many people ask, “WHEN?” It always makes me a little embarrassed, because I’ve been giving out these dates, and they turn out to be wrong, so I look like I’m an idiot, or uninformed.
I can only say, “Soon! I hope.”
Keep your fingers crossed with me. (Though that does make it hard to type).
In the meantime, I hope you’ve been enjoying the snippets of Book three: Grace Awakening Myths that you can find here on the blog. I hope it’s a small consolation?
Soooooooooooooooon…..
editing fun April 28, 2012
Tags: comments, editing, editor, English, jokes
I enjoy the editing process. I love considering the questions that force me to think. Figuring out alternatives or motivations (therefore to bring a new truth) or tossing something that isn’t supported is very empowering. I see the process of these discussions as literary improv. Off the top of my head I have to be able to come up with a plausible reason for whatever question has been asked. Sometimes the answer has been in the story, but sometimes it’s back story stuff, but it needs to be consistent with character. I can be very creative. Sometimes my convoluted solutions are approved, but sometimes a set of lowered brows indicates I need to use my delete key, and kill my babies.
My editor, Vikki, peppers the manuscript with comments. Lots of times it’s just grammar corrections (Vikki is a grammar nazi), some moments earn exclamations, often she poses an intriguing question, and sometimes, when she’s been at it far too long and is plainly getting overtired, it can simply be entertaining.
My two favorite comments from the final edits of Grace Awakening Power:
“You use mad every time you mean angry. I know you are being colloquial, but it would be okay to use the correct word sometimes, again, as a model for young readers. And to add variety.”
I think of “mad dogs and Englishmen” in her context. :-) I always use ‘mad’ for ‘angry’ rather than to mean ‘crazy.’ Some days ‘shift F7′ is used more often than others!
Here’s my favorite comment:
“This event is an opportunity for Grace to accidentally bump up the energy, with people leaping from their wheelchairs and bursting into song, or something slightly more subdued. Grace and Ben together should be contagious, not just Grace for Ben.”
HA! ”or something slightly more subdued!” HA HA! They still crack me up.
Like the joke a friend sent me on Facebook today: :The past, present, and future walked into a bar. It was tense.” Bwaa ha haa!! I told it to my husband, cackling gleefully after the punch line and he stood straight faced looking at me, then shook his head and remarked, “Yeah. That sounds like an English teacher joke.” :-D
PS> I was VERY excited that Grace Awakening Dreams and Power, the trade paperback omnibus of the two e-books, is now available for sale to the public! There’s a link to purchase in the bar above. I know some have already sold, and I wonder if other folks will be reading it before my own case of books makes it through customs.
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