You stand against the
wall, arms crossed, sardonic smile
immune to laughter.
.
You’ve seen darkness that
they can only imagine,
and you are hardened
.
from the admiration
of flirting gazes because
your heart is cold,
.
Frozen by bad maternity
and noncommittal
paternity.
.
Their bad judgements burn
within your heart until
destroying misery
.
means destroying
everything you should love,
innocent or guilty,
.
and then it means
flash firing your future,
scarring your life upon ours,
.
like a victim of
Hiroshima’s bombs whose life
vanishes in an
.
instant, leaving only
a silhouette, burnt white
on blackened walls.
.
.
I’m still processing the recent murder/suicide of a former student. The idea of an image being frozen in memory by tragedy called to mind the silhouettes created in Hiroshima when people’s shadoes were left, though their bodies were vaporized. While at first glance a free verse, the poem has some form: each triplet stanza follows the haiku syllable count (17 syllables per stanza) to reiterate this idea.

future hope December 5, 2011
Tags: hope, postaday2011, proverbs 29:18, Richard Armitage, vision
(from http://www.tv.com/people/richard-armitage/trivia/)
Armitage is referring in this quote to a character who must kill his beloved, so the observation is a bit of an understatement! Taking the remarks out of that specific context, however, there is a bit of a message here.
When we do not have hope, we are destroyed. In desperate situations–times of war, for example–those without hope have no strength to carry on. They give up and are lost. In contrast, those who hope that better days are coming, fight strength to live another day.
Proverbs 29:18 suggests that “Without vision, the people perish.” Vision can be equated with hope in this situation. You have to be able to imagine a better future, and if you can begin to actually formulate plans to improve the future, so much the better. Vision is hope.
I know someone who is going through a bitter divorce at the moment. Bitterness, agony, rejection and depression are sucking hope out of life, and there is no positive vision. Unable to hear that he holds in his own hands the ability to create his own happiness, helplessness has overwhelmed him.
The second part of Proverbs 29:18 adds, “but he that keeps the law is happy.” I’m not sure how vision fits with keeping the law. How does do they relate to each other? The idea of obedience bringing happiness fits with theocratic governance, of course, but vision and obedience seem somewhat at odds. Those who take the vision and make it power have the joy of living in a spirit of grace, whether or not they’re happy with the law.
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