Shawn L. Bird

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poem- retirement project May 5, 2015

Filed under: fun,Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 4:56 pm
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That old shell of a van

might make a fun project for you.

Just think, when it’s done

you can make out in the back with a hot chick,

or at least a chick with hot flashes.



24 Responses to “poem- retirement project”

  1. Ha! Made me laugh!! Have a great night, Shawn 🙂

  2. georgiakevin Says:

    What a fun little poem!

  3. Lol! I love it. 🙂

  4. narble Says:

    I’ll be smiling at this one all evening.

  5. T.R. Sanders Says:

    Cougar van! Chicks with hot flashes are the best kind… 😉

  6. Laurie Keim Says:

    The shell and the hatching out: iridescence everywhere. cheers

  7. Fun poem! Perfectly paired with the photo, Love the end! 🙂

    • lol
      My husband used to own a van of the same vintage.
      He found this ad and was all nostalgic. I suggested it would be a good project for him… Basically the conversation played out as it does in the poem. He was less amused than I was by my wit (as is frequently the case). 😉

  8. She with hot flashes needs all the more love.

  9. kiwiskan Says:

    somehow I just can’t see it…

  10. Rob McShane Says:

    Or, at my age, a chick with hot flushes! 🙂

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