Shawn L. Bird

26 Responses to “poem-window salvage”

1. Let's CUT the Crap! Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 12:56 pm

   🙂

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 1:04 pm

     😉

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2. Jeff Schwaner Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 1:11 pm

   or even just a smaller cathedral.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 1:28 pm

     lol A very, very, very little one, perhaps… 😉

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3. Dom DiFrancesco Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 2:12 pm

   This is a great poem Shawn, I love the image of the dragonfly wings representing the windows in the cathedral. Very creative.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 9:53 pm

     Thanks Dom.

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4. words4jp Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 2:49 pm

   Very sweet. 😉

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 9:54 pm

     Thank you, Kim.

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5. willow1945 Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 3:09 pm

   Love this!

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 9:53 pm

     Thank you.

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6. Kim B Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 3:43 pm

   Not sure about some of the line breaks, but that is some gorgeous imagery. Someone needs to build that cathedral.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 9:52 pm

     I like a lot of enjambment.

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7. griecojl Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 5:20 pm

   ❤

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 9:51 pm

     Thanks. Glad ya like it

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8. Brenda Davis Harsham Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 6:13 pm

   Dragonfly wings are gorgeous. I just posted a picture of one 5 minutes ago. I love your poem better than mine. I could hate you. LOL But I don’t. Namaste, Brenda

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 9:51 pm

     lol

     Whew.

     😉

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9. dancingpalmtrees Says:

   August 20, 2014 at 6:35 pm

   Cool. A little insect mausoleum! Very Addams Family. I Love this poem!!

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     August 20, 2014 at 9:49 pm

     lol

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10. Bhavani Ramani Says:

    August 20, 2014 at 11:37 pm

    Wonderful imagery, Shawn. Could you give your valuable comments on my posts, one at a time…I eagerly look forward to your views.

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    • Shawn L. Bird Says:

      August 21, 2014 at 12:15 am

      I will send you a private message, Bhavani.

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11. Joanna (Lazuli Portals Trilogy) Says:

    August 21, 2014 at 2:21 am

    Love your imagery 🙂
    Thanks for following our blog … my co-author, Ron, is a Rotarian, too. 🙂

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    • Shawn L. Bird Says:

      August 21, 2014 at 12:52 pm

      Thank you. I am glad you stopped in. Greetings to Rotarian Ron!

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12. schn00dles Says:

    August 21, 2014 at 6:31 am

    Very nice. I’d like to see it continue.

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    • Shawn L. Bird Says:

      August 21, 2014 at 12:48 pm

      Thanks.

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13. Lorien Says:

    August 21, 2014 at 11:45 pm

    Ooooooohhhhhh. (Said in reverence, upon sight of the cathedral with dragonfly wing windows.)

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    • Shawn L. Bird Says:

      August 22, 2014 at 12:09 am

      😉

      Kind of like https://shawnbird.com/2013/09/30/writing-prompt-mondaymeme-of-modern-stained-glass/

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