Shawn L. Bird

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poem- I am sky January 28, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:31 am
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I

am sky

You

are an

ocean view

We are

a forest

of trees.

Sigh

blue

sea.

I.

You

We.

 

12 Responses to “poem- I am sky”

  1. Geo Sans's avatar Geo Sans Says:

    analogous
    ~
    relationships

  2. Georgia's avatar Bastet Says:

    nice…I like the progressive sense of it. 🙂

  3. vicklinde's avatar vicklinde Says:

    Love this one!
    V.

  4. unfetteredbs's avatar unfetteredbs Says:

    Lovely

  5. this one is quite intriguing

  6. seanbidd's avatar seanbidd Says:

    Currents, tide, and ocean winds, word wrapped letters within, each line in leaves, as boats sail the windward, or the reach.


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