Shawn L. Bird

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poem- fiery eyes November 19, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:41 pm
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Mist drifts on snowy mountains,

slash piles burning:

molten eyes in a ghostly face

glowing above us


12 Responses to “poem- fiery eyes”

  1. wbdeejay Says:

    Change in the environment

    • No, this is the normal time for snow in the hills, and the logging companies burn their slash piles when the fire danger is low from the moisture of the snow. The glow is spooky, though!

  2. Eli Pacheco Says:

    just 17 words, and so vivid. Eerie, yes. My favorite line: “molten eyes in a ghostly face” …

  3. Oooh…how vivid! Nice contrast between the snow and mist and the molten burning glow.

  4. toad (chris jensen) Says:

    Reblogged this on tot123itsme.

  5. Reblogged this on Jesse Talks Back and commented:
    Okay, I have found another wonderful place filled with beautiful words crafted by an exotic beauty

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