Adrian, muscles rippling
and glistening from summer sun,
as the girls grip
their nails in their fists, wishing.
Adrian, head emerging from car engine
wringing greasy hands,
and grinning a greeting,
reaching for his shirt,
as the girls glide in, sniffing;
whiffing at pheromones
that hint of moaning, groaning
atonement.
Good girls watching as
Adrian gets ready
for Bible study.
Yo’ Adrian!! Whatcha studying? Samson & Delilah maybe?!! Sorry Shawn, I couldn’t resist!! LOL!!
lol. Adrian smelled *really* good. He was distracting, but he was mortified the one time I mentioned it! 😉 Such a good boy. No idea about those leaking pheromones and the havoc they were causing.
lol
😉
Is Adrian a work of fiction of real? Perhaps he’s so caught up with being good, he’s not realising what effect he’s having on the opposite sex.
He was a real person, he did have this effect, and I don’t think he knew it. However, there is some serious poetic license taken with the facts.
lol…..Loved this. 🙂
Thanks.
Reblogged this on tot123itsme.
I find it fascinating that we read some much each other, yet we have what others call “conflict of interest”, I ask why is that?
A good question, indeed, Chris.
This was a real lol!!! Good heavens, why did God make those delightful pheromones so potent!!!! ❤ it! (And the poetic license you've taken… ;))
Glad you enjoyed it. (The poetic licence involved the working on the car. The rest is true! lol)
Great poem, I love to be drawn into the event, to feel as if I’m there. I love your site and your work, and I feel very honored that you liked my poem. Thank you! P.S. Love your hair! Goes beautifully with your name.
How sweet of you! Thank you, very much
I love the punch at the end lol … 🙂
Very cheeky, I know… 😉
Lol, Yes Ma’am!! 🙂
What mrsjacoby said, good punch. Curious me: Is Adrian someone you know?
Oh,
a trillion years ago
or so,
I inhaled those
pheromones… 😉
ha! so good!
😉