Shawn L. Bird

Original poetry, commentary, and fiction. All copyrights reserved.

poem- Adrian October 20, 2013

Adrian, muscles rippling

and  glistening from summer sun,

as the girls grip

their nails in their fists, wishing.

Adrian, head emerging from car engine

wringing greasy hands,

and grinning a greeting,

reaching for his shirt,

as the girls glide in, sniffing;

whiffing at pheromones

that hint of moaning, groaning

atonement.

Good girls watching as

Adrian gets ready

for Bible study.

 

22 Responses to “poem- Adrian”

  1. Yo’ Adrian!! Whatcha studying? Samson & Delilah maybe?!! Sorry Shawn, I couldn’t resist!! LOL!!

    • lol. Adrian smelled *really* good. He was distracting, but he was mortified the one time I mentioned it! 😉 Such a good boy. No idea about those leaking pheromones and the havoc they were causing.

  2. Cyan Ryan's avatar hakariconstant Says:

    lol

  3. timthepoet's avatar timthepoet Says:

    Is Adrian a work of fiction of real? Perhaps he’s so caught up with being good, he’s not realising what effect he’s having on the opposite sex.

  4. Skye's avatar Skye Says:

    lol…..Loved this. 🙂

  5. toad (chris jensen)'s avatar toad (chris jensen) Says:

    Reblogged this on tot123itsme.

  6. toad (chris jensen)'s avatar toad (chris jensen) Says:

    I find it fascinating that we read some much each other, yet we have what others call “conflict of interest”, I ask why is that?

  7. keelymyles's avatar keelymyles Says:

    This was a real lol!!! Good heavens, why did God make those delightful pheromones so potent!!!! ❤ it! (And the poetic license you've taken… ;))

  8. Great poem, I love to be drawn into the event, to feel as if I’m there. I love your site and your work, and I feel very honored that you liked my poem. Thank you! P.S. Love your hair! Goes beautifully with your name.

  9. mrsjacoby19's avatar mrsjacoby19 Says:

    I love the punch at the end lol … 🙂

  10. Fiza's avatar xoxosanaz90210 Says:

    What mrsjacoby said, good punch. Curious me: Is Adrian someone you know?


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