Shawn L. Bird

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poem- slow January 4, 2017

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:31 pm
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I’m moving through molasses

going slowly,

thinking like my thoughts are spilled ink

too dark to decipher.

Winter weather draws the sky closer,

closeting us in cloud,

so much white is blinding.

Days are short, but oh, so, slow

and cold.




18 Responses to “poem- slow”

  1. cote8050 Says:

    This is nice. I like the line “winter weather draws the sky closer” it really does, doesn’t it 🙂 nice job I look forward to reading more of your work. Michelle

  2. Sort of like a half-day of school, before a holiday.

  3. Oh, I know those feelings!

  4. Happy New Year! ♡ ☆
    Great poem for winter. It was in the 40s & 50s for the holidays but the temperature are going down to the 30s tonight. Freezing temperature are about to hit New York City.

  5. Too creative to paint the winter!😊

  6. Bibishan Says:

    Can you read my mind or what??

  7. Great poem! And just thinking, it’s only January

  8. Very wintry, suits my mood just now. Thanks, nice work.

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