In the early morning
the view is clear;
we can see for miles.
As day emerges,
clouds obscure our vision,
our perspective decreases.
Clarity before obscurity.
Peace before busyness.
One to hold the other at bay.
In the early morning
the view is clear;
we can see for miles.
As day emerges,
clouds obscure our vision,
our perspective decreases.
Clarity before obscurity.
Peace before busyness.
One to hold the other at bay.
Shawn Bird is an author, poet, and educator in the beautiful Shuswap region of British Columbia, Canada. She is a proud member of Rotary.
Beautifully simple.
Thanks.
peace before busyness….
mmmmm well said
Thank you.
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Exactly! Mornings are the best and the earlier we get up the more possible everything appears to be πβ€οΈοΈ
lol
Personally, I’m a night owl, and more inclined to see dawn from the other direction. π We had a friend in town this weekend, staying at a B&B. He said when he got up, he had an amazing view, but by the time the wife woke up, everything was shrouded in mist. I could see a metaphor there! π
Quite beautiful. Perfect ending. I like perfect endings. π
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Your priorities are spot on, as ever.
Thanks for stopping by. It’s a pleasure to have such a regular reader!
The clouds I reckon is a metaphor for distractions? Loved the message.
Could be…
Thanks.
Niceπ, I’m looking for a mentor because I am new here. Do you mind?
All the best.
Ok, well could you check my work. Would like a comment from a poet like you
That is definitely possible. π
Simple and elegant π
It would be my honor if you can check out my blog too and take a look at my poems π
beautifully simplistic π
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