Shawn L. Bird

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poem- hollows July 20, 2014

I wait

in the hollow place

for you

You happily celebrate

the concavities

but appreciate

the complexities

of the convexities.

In hollow places

grace erases traces

of solemnity and

embraces totality,

while

I wait

for you.

 

 

22 Responses to “poem- hollows”

  1. Meredith's avatar Meredith Says:

    Intrigued by contrasts.

  2. colonialist's avatar colonialist Says:

    Cunningly phrased, indeed!

  3. Caro's avatar carolineexxie Says:

    Brilliant!

  4. Godefroy D.'s avatar Godefroy D. Says:

    One of my favourites by you =)

  5. I don’t have a favorite “yet” – I’m in awe of everything you write. I’d love to give you a snapshot of my heart, dreams and thoughts and have you put it into words. You are one of the handful of people I am in extreme awe of since joining WP. Talent beyond comprehension.

  6. howardat58's avatar howardat58 Says:

    NEAT ! And I like it. (not searching for hidden meanings)

  7. Coach D's avatar Dai Verse Says:

    I love the rhythm of this piece

  8. ameliapond's avatar cloudychaos Says:

    Reblogged this on It's Cloudy with a Chance of Chaos and commented:
    Very nice poem. 🙂

  9. words4jp's avatar words4jp Says:

    yes, cunning – you are like a sly fox….:)

  10. One of my favorites so far. Fantastically written.


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