Shawn L. Bird

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poem- hollows July 20, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:45 pm
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I wait

in the hollow place

for you

You happily celebrate

the concavities

but appreciate

the complexities

of the convexities.

In hollow places

grace erases traces

of solemnity and

embraces totality,

while

I wait

for you.

 

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22 Responses to “poem- hollows”

  1. Meredith Says:
    July 20, 2014 at 12:54 pm

    Intrigued by contrasts.

    Reply
  2. colonialist Says:
    July 20, 2014 at 1:15 pm

    Cunningly phrased, indeed!

    Reply
  3. carolineexxie Says:
    July 20, 2014 at 1:29 pm

    Brilliant!

    Reply
  4. Godefroy D. Says:
    July 20, 2014 at 1:41 pm

    One of my favourites by you =)

    Reply
  5. planetdreamdiaries Says:
    July 20, 2014 at 3:42 pm

    I don’t have a favorite “yet” – I’m in awe of everything you write. I’d love to give you a snapshot of my heart, dreams and thoughts and have you put it into words. You are one of the handful of people I am in extreme awe of since joining WP. Talent beyond comprehension.

    Reply
  6. howardat58 Says:
    July 20, 2014 at 4:51 pm

    NEAT ! And I like it. (not searching for hidden meanings)

    Reply
  7. Dai Verse Says:
    July 21, 2014 at 12:09 am

    I love the rhythm of this piece

    Reply
  8. cloudychaos Says:
    July 21, 2014 at 12:40 am

    Reblogged this on It's Cloudy with a Chance of Chaos and commented:
    Very nice poem. 🙂

    Reply
  9. words4jp Says:
    July 21, 2014 at 4:43 am

    yes, cunning – you are like a sly fox….:)

    Reply
  10. simplycomplex Says:
    July 21, 2014 at 7:10 pm

    One of my favorites so far. Fantastically written.

    Reply

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