Shawn L. Bird

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poem-timeless July 10, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:04 pm
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On this

summer                 day,

lost                in you,

I see no end.




This poem is my 1500th post! 🙂

There are a few ways to read this one, each painting a slightly different picture.


43 Responses to “poem-timeless”

  1. colonialist Says:

    Great. Makes me envious, though. We are not exactly experiencing summer!

  2. narble Says:

    1500 and you’re still excited. That is a good sign.

  3. redgladiola Says:

    Lovely poem. And congrats!

  4. Congratulations on your 1500th post! WOW!

  5. My son has been telling me about his site that has funny mad libs to things so in the breaks I was putting those in which were fun and colorful also reading it like a cloud floating by me.
    Congrats on the 1500 post
    I’m more wordy all at once with my articles then with my poetry!
    keep on going!

  6. ahtdoucette Says:

    Congrats on your 1500th post! Wow. I love the way(s) that poem flows!

  7. cphickey77 Says:

    1500? Great job! Love this poem and the many ways which it shines when I turn it differently in the light.

  8. loydbrown Says:

    Makes you take a deep breath with timeless memories

  9. joe casey Says:

    Congrats! I have only 1494 little ditties to produce to catch up…Loved the poem, too.

  10. jensenempire2551 Says:

    It has been a while miss bird….

  11. I like the way you spaced the words to reflect the “lost” theme. Blessings to you, Shawn…

  12. words4jp Says:

    Wow – 1500!! What an wonderful accomplishment. And you have posted quite a fun one at that. I like the different ‘faces’.

  13. Two readings in one poem. The syntax itself enriches the readings of your poem. This is delightful 🙂

  14. Ruchi Chopra Says:

    Congrats for ur blog milestone 🙂 good wishes.

  15. pi314chron Says:

    Intriguing and delightful! Congratulations on the 1500 posts!! 🙂


  16. Lorien Says:

    Congrats! Have you attained some kind of magical power with such discipline? Are you flying? Do you have laser vision?

  17. Rob McShane Says:

    Brilliant Shawn….Congrats and respect! A great poem/picture to celebrate it…as you say…the universal picture of life! Love it! Thank you….:)

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