Shawn L. Bird

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poem- changes July 9, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:15 pm
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The day after she turned fifty,

She found four spider veins

She was sure weren’t there

when she was forty-nine.

 

39 Responses to “poem- changes”

  1. I’m not 50 yet but this does remind me of what happened right around my 35th birthday. All those lines that weren’t there yesterday suddenly appeared.

  2. atimetoshare.me's avatar atimetoshare Says:

    Lol, I can relate.

  3. howardat58's avatar howardat58 Says:

    I blame it all on the base 10 (decimal) number system.

  4. words4jp's avatar words4jp Says:

    I am 49 now. Not liking it much. Not at all though I know I need to just suck it up.

  5. I can relate to this poem though not with my veins. So far I still have great legs at age 55. My new guy friend loves my legs. So all that going to the gym works!! However when I was 52 all my hair turned white!! I always thought that it was just a fable that folks turned grey overnight! It’s true. At that point I began my relationship with my SisterFriend named L’Oreal!! In fact she and I are enjoying some Chinese take-out while I remind those greys who’s boss and wait while my Afro magically turns Magenta!! Ooo La La!! Fifty-Five and on Fire!!

  6. Oh how funny – my birthday’s approaching *shudder* – and I just wrote something so much like this – different, but so much like this. I don’t wish either one of us the changes of age – but it’s a wonderful feeling to know that you’re not alone. ❤ lol

  7. Rajiv's avatar Rajiv Says:

    Oh dear! That’s change alright !

  8. indernik's avatar indernik Says:

    Hi Shawn!! I still remember your words and how you stay awake till late night to write and read. I was thinking of starting mini series based on the interviews of few wordpress writers and poets for my blog waitforyourcall(dot)wordpress. You are one of them. Questions will be simple. And your individual interview will be published on my blog. Should I consider your presence in it. Do let me know about it 🙂

  9. Cryptic Garland's avatar suchled Says:

    The day my hair started to go grey and my mind started to fade I had to ask how old I was

  10. robmcshane's avatar Rob McShane Says:

    Yep…we can relate to this one!…Age…the leveller! 🙂

  11. XperDunn's avatar XperDunn Says:

    Your recent poetry is maturing nicely (no joke intended about this particular poem). I’m really getting into it…


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