I would name you
Summer Sun,.
gift you with warm days,
laughter,
joy.
I would take away your darkness,
fill you with light,
give your words flight,
embrace hope
in your future.
I would name you
Summer Sun,.
gift you with warm days,
laughter,
joy.
I would take away your darkness,
fill you with light,
give your words flight,
embrace hope
in your future.
Nicely put! Even though, I like the dark!
Thank you.
wow – as they say: : Storms Never Last – I am beyond humbled.
How nice.
What do I think? I thought it was beautifully uplifting poem.
Thanks, Charly.
A lovely thought to start my day. Thank you.
My pleasure.
Would request you to read my verse on change and give your remarks.
Thank you and regards
Will try to do it after my wild and crazy weekend with Word on the Lake Writing Festival (www.saow.ca) which startes for me in 90 mins. If I don’t, send me a message on my About page next Monday.
All those things, and more, we should give.
Yes.
Love this!
Thanks Chris.
Beautiful!
Thank you.
Very beautiful Shawn : )
Glad you like it.
: )
🙂
That is very beautifully written. Very warm and touching.
Thanks.
I’m guessing that should read ‘your future’, rather than ‘you future’..
It should.
Reassuring and hopeful. Nice!
Thank you.
Beautiful.
Thank you.
I love this.
Thanks
I love reading ur poems Shawn 🙂
Thank you.
Simple yet lovely.
Thank you