Shawn L. Bird

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poem- change May 15, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:50 am
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I would name you

Summer Sun,.

gift you with warm days,

laughter,

joy.

I would take away your darkness,

fill you with light,

give your words flight,

embrace hope

in your future.

 

34 Responses to “poem- change”

  1. Rajiv's avatar Rajiv Says:

    Nicely put! Even though, I like the dark!

  2. mihrankalaydjianblog's avatar mihrank Says:

    wow – as they say: : Storms Never Last – I am beyond humbled.

  3. charlypriest's avatar charlypriest Says:

    What do I think? I thought it was beautifully uplifting poem.

  4. A lovely thought to start my day. Thank you.

  5. lramani33's avatar lramani33 Says:

    Would request you to read my verse on change and give your remarks.
    Thank you and regards

    • Will try to do it after my wild and crazy weekend with Word on the Lake Writing Festival (www.saow.ca) which startes for me in 90 mins. If I don’t, send me a message on my About page next Monday.

  6. mikedohsays's avatar mikedohsays Says:

    All those things, and more, we should give.

  7. syl65's avatar syl65 Says:

    Very beautiful Shawn : )

  8. beckyg1003's avatar beckyg1003 Says:

    That is very beautifully written. Very warm and touching.

  9. XperDunn's avatar XperDunn Says:

    I’m guessing that should read ‘your future’, rather than ‘you future’..

  10. redgladiola's avatar redgladiola Says:

    Reassuring and hopeful. Nice!

  11. vibrantfingertips's avatar vibrantfingertips Says:

    I love this.

  12. I love reading ur poems Shawn 🙂

  13. opetokun's avatar opetokun Says:

    Simple yet lovely.


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