Shawn L. Bird

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poem- ancient understatement April 7, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:23 pm
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My father,

born 1914,

grumbles about his sore eye

and sighs,

“I guess

I’m getting old.”

.

.

(True story).

 

30 Responses to “poem- ancient understatement”

  1. Komarovstyle's avatar komarovstyle Says:

    Good one…….. πŸ™‚

  2. Arianna Editrix's avatar Arianna Editrix Says:

    So your da is older than mine would be? Amazing!

  3. God bless him. He sounds as if age has no meaning for him.

    • Well, he’s gone quite blind and considerably deaf, and that frustrates him no end, but other than those minor inconveniences, he’s doing very well. He’s even the goalie on their Old Folks floor hockey team. lol

  4. davidprosser's avatar davidprosser Says:

    Must have had you in his late eighties / early nineties Shawn.
    xxx Huge Hugs xxx

  5. anonymous's avatar aishpandey Says:

    good short poem πŸ™‚

  6. Scott's avatar Scott Says:

    Ah, I can identify with that line. It as a privilege. Only those of us who live long enough to grow old can truthfully make that statement.

  7. macjam47's avatar macjam47 Says:

    You’ve just got to love dads!

  8. beijas's avatar beijas Says:

    And you tell him, “Not yet, Dad.” Too sweet!

  9. Nordiana Noordin's avatar Diana N. Din Says:

    Understatement of the year! Really nice short poem though, really relatable. πŸ™‚

  10. colonialist's avatar colonialist Says:

    I hope he got a few brisk, ‘Oh, nonsense!’ -es, πŸ™‚

  11. This reminds me of my Dad, who still drives and lives life at the young age of 94! πŸ™‚

  12. skykinwrite's avatar skykinwrite Says:

    Wow! He can still see! Good genes.


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