Shawn L. Bird

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poem- lit up February 10, 2014

Filed under: Poetry,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:20 pm
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You read

lit up,

laughing.

You read

looking

into the depths.

You read

seeing beyond

what is

to what can be.

You read

lit up

and light me,

too.

.

.

.

(In praise of my wonderful editor, Vikki, who looks at the messes I get myself into, and asks all the right questions to help me find my way again).

 

16 Responses to “poem- lit up”

  1. davidprosser Says:

    Lovely though your poems are Shawn, it seems ages since we’ve had a blog full of interesting things about you, about the family or about school. Maybe some news of the WIP you have on Fb?
    xxx Sending Huge Hugs xxx

    • True David. I’ve shifted focus on the blog, in response to what the readers prefer based on the stats. I use Twitter for commentary, FB for samples, and the blog for poetry. As to the WIP- until I met up with Vikki today, I was staring at a lot of charts and notes. Got some writing done tonight though, so hopefully I’ll be able to get back into the rhythm and I’ll have more to post on FB soon.

  2. Vikki S Says:

    Many humble thanks. What a wonderful gift to start my day. -Vikki

  3. thisoldtoad2014 Says:

    Reblogged this on tot123itsme.

  4. thisoldtoad2014 Says:

    my hope is that our paths cross someday, so that we may gaze into each others eyes.

  5. thisoldtoad2014 Says:

    Than there is moderation the hidden approval… my my so cautious throughout life… Where is your sense of hidden adventure darling?

  6. Angela Says:

    Lovely tribute! Great poem.

  7. doncarroll Says:

    the way I see it here is that is the way a writer would want to create to experience the bliss from that offering felt by another. btw….I’ve finally received some good news as to the stresser I’ve been absorbing. hence that is why I was struggling in other areas.


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