lol Still looking at that line, I confess. I’m pondering “see the fracture lines in your eyes” Hmm. Which do you prefer? Nice thing about digital publishing.
I didn’t mean for you to change the line. I understood she “saw the fracture (of the soul, heart) through your eyes.” I prefer this line as you first shared it. Thanks.
It wasn’t quite right, and the change better reflects what I was visualizing: a fracture line visible when you look at the eyes- you know that slightly haunted expression? My blog poetry is always mutable.
I would have offered duct tape.
lol
This is such a beautiful and meaningful piece. Such loving and encouraging words.
Thanks.
I love it.
I’m glad! Thanks for dropping by my blog.
Lovin’ the love. 🙂
Thanks.
I like your poem. “see the fracture through your eyes” a good line. Eyes tell so much more than words.
lol Still looking at that line, I confess. I’m pondering “see the fracture lines in your eyes” Hmm. Which do you prefer? Nice thing about digital publishing.
Thanks for stopping in!
I didn’t mean for you to change the line. I understood she “saw the fracture (of the soul, heart) through your eyes.” I prefer this line as you first shared it. Thanks.
It wasn’t quite right, and the change better reflects what I was visualizing: a fracture line visible when you look at the eyes- you know that slightly haunted expression? My blog poetry is always mutable.
What a beautiful expression of love.
Glad you liked it.
The . After the word broken… Perfect.
thanks
That’s Love.
xxx Huge Hugs xxx
Yes
Sharing hope, I like that.
Thanks.
You’re welcome Shawn. Some good reading 🙂
I like “behind” like they are hidden
Thanks. 🙂
Exquisite!!
Glad you like it.