Shawn L. Bird

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poem- October October 2, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:28 am
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Some years,

September exits in a swish of scarlet, and

October dawns dappled in gold.

But this year,

October is opulent in shimmering emerald velvet.

Forests hold back their  adornment.

The morning whispers on wisps of fog beyond

“I will wait.”

All around the lake, summer aches for more time,

grips tight to verdant hues,

and as October embraces green

its ochre arms

bide

the firey glory

of autumn.

 

28 Responses to “poem- October”

  1. Love that one! Especially “emerald velvet”…makes me think of a primeval forest…

  2. Bhuwan's avatar Bhuwan Says:

    Beautiful. Makes me miss the nature.

  3. billiamholt's avatar billiamholt Says:

    Beautifully descriptive! You took me there. Thanks for writing!

  4. Where’s the “love” button!!

  5. Kev's avatar Kev Says:

    Very, very very nice!

  6. davidprosser's avatar davidprosser Says:

    Beautiful Shawn. xxx Hugs Galore xxx

  7. Reblogged this on Espiritu en Fuego/A Fiery Spirit and commented:
    Wonderful Autumn Season poem. Fits great with my Foggy Misty Morn Central Park photos. Amazing imagery. Excellent wordplay.

  8. gurkski's avatar gurkski Says:

    I like the mood expressed in this poem and also the alliterations and the “natural” (I mean: non-artificial) flow of this fine opusculum. 😉 cheers serge

  9. Fiza's avatar xoxosanaz90210 Says:

    I love this poem!!

  10. Anon's avatar Eva PoeteX Says:

    I was just thinking this today. I find it odd that the trees are SO green this time of year! You captured this perfectly in your poem. 😀

  11. Excellent as always!!

  12. ginizoo's avatar ginizoo Says:

    Thanks for the follow on ‘And a poem on the side, please’. Pleased to reciprocate and look forward to following your blog.


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