Shawn L. Bird

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Review- Lost in Spaaaaaaain July 11, 2012

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Lost in Spain.

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LOST IN SPAIN by John Wilson

Markham: Fitzhenry & Whiteside, 2000.  174 p.

YA historical novel

It is a fast read, so it’s not deep, but it did give me a real sense of the Spanish Civil War that fit with what I experienced and heard when I was in Spain earlier this year. Lots of action to keep you flipping pages. I was stunned when I started reading and discovered the book opened in my small BC town! Not what you expect about a book set in Spain, you can imagine. I was irritated by how Ted refers to his father as Will throughout the book. Why doesn’t he call him dad? or father? It’s so strange, it seemed there should be a reason for it. He calls his mother, Mom, after all. An interesting read that seemed to give a good glimpse at the character of the country and the context for the history.
 

Review- A Perfect Gentle Knight July 9, 2012

A Perfect Gentle KnightA Perfect Gentle Knight by Kit Pearson seemed to have an identity crisis. The main character is 11, and it read a lot like a children’s book, but it was set up as a baby boomer memoir, casually referring to events and objects that would be foreign to 11 year olds without any context or explanation. The themes are big: loss, mental illness, coming of age. I think perhaps they are too big for this 164 page format, and too big for 11 year old Corrie to do justice to on her own. I would have loved to see this story twice as long so the characters could have been more finely drawn, the dialogue used more to advance the plot, and to create more of an immersion experience. It felt like the story moved in thick chunks, rather than flowing. I think 60 year olds who grew up in Vancouver would find this a lovely nostalgic book, but I think it misses the mark as a kids’ book, which is a shame, because it could have been fantastic if 1950’s Vancouver could have become as real as, say 1900’s PEI is in the Anne of Green Gables books

 

One glance at a book… July 8, 2012

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Ah, the adventures we walk into when we open a book!

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any kind of happy? June 27, 2012

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“Being any kind of happy is better than being miserable about someone you can’t have.”

~Leah in Breaking Dawn

Stephenie  Meyer

In the Twilight Saga, Jacob loves Bella, but Bella loves Edward.  However, she loves Jacob, too.  If we were to pull out the Greek words for love, I think we’d be using three different words in this triangle.   Bella’s affections for Jacob are like a family attachment: storge.  Her feelings for Edward are sexual: eros.  Jacob’s feelings for Bella suggest a bit of agape, but also the comradry of philia.  There is a lot of complexity going on as these different kinds of love all simmer together, complicating things.

So Jacob can’t have Bella the way he would like, and Leah thinks anything is better than nothing.  Each of the words above is a fragment of attachment, one can have several of them at once.  What do you think?  Is one better than nothing?  Is each valuable in its own way?  Do you have to have all or a majority of them in one relationship to make it valuable?

 

Look to Canadian authors for a good read June 19, 2012

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Look to Canadian authors for a good read.  Article by Joan Wickersham from the Boston Globe.  Another Canadian author to try?  Me!  ;-P

 

happiness is. June 4, 2012

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Today, happiness is being party to Twitter messages travelling between two young people reading #GraceAwakening.  The message ” ❤ Josh” had me teary-eyed.

It makes me happy when readers love my imaginary friends!  🙂

 

vocabulary lessons with Diana Gabaldon June 3, 2012

I am an avid reader and an English teacher, so I have a pretty good vocabulary.  However, reading Diana Gabaldon has introduced me to many new words.  This is an ongoing effort to identify words I discovered through her books.  I am noting them as I re-read or as Diana posts Daily Lines of the latest book in progress.  Feel free to add your own additions in the comments!

OUBLIETTE. (Voyager, used metaphorically) a top loading dungeon (a.k.a. a thieves’ hole).  I find it amusing that this word wasn’t used while Claire was actually inside the thieves’ hole in Cranesmuir which is arguably a real oubliette.  Jamie uses the word to refer to being below deck on a ship.  It shows up again in Drums of Autumn, and this time young William is in an ‘oubliette.’  In that instance, it’s particularly funny, because William has, in fact, fallen into the privy.  Note the French root : Oublier (to forget).  As in, they’ll toss you in the dungeon and forget about you…  Luckily, no one forgets William in the privy hole.

 AVUNCULAR. (Drums of Autumn, the postman winks avuncularly) uncle-like. Ian uses the noun form Avunculus when writing to Jamie in Latin. Something like,  “Ian salutas Avunculus Jacobus.”  (I’ll correct that when I come across it during the re-read). s Avunculus Jacobus meaning Uncle James, of course.

ALACRITY (throughout the series).  Claire (and others) frequently do things eagerly or in cheerful readiness, i.e.  ‘with alacrity.’  I suspect this one of DG’s favourite words, actually.  Whenever Davina Porter says it in my audio books, I always grin and repeat solemnly, “with alacrity!” 🙂  When we hosted Diana here at our writers’ conference I gave her a dish towel I’d hand embroidered with “Do it with alacrity!” as a joke.  🙂

SMOOR is always used in Outlander  in the sense of  ‘to smoor the fire.’  It means ‘to smother’ in Scots.  One smothers the fire so it continues to burn slowly throughout the night.   There’s an interesting article about historical usage on the Scots Language Centre website.  Click to listen to it said, the ‘oooo’ is long and the /r/ rolls.  A lovely word spoken!  Smoor can be used to mean killing a person by depriving them of air or to mean snow covering something.  My favorite use is from that link, quoting Robert Louis Stevenson, (Merry Men 1887)  “a mune smoored wi’ mist.”  Isn’t that a romantic image for a moon being smothered by fog!

FRESHET (from Drums of Autumn).  Claire sees  freshets when she gets stranded between the Muellers and Frasers’ Ridge.  It’s a sudden overflowing of a stream due to heavy rains or rapid melting.

BATHYSPHERE.  I kid you not.  This one comes from a daily lines posting (Jun 6, 2012) of book 8 in the series  called Written in My Own Heart’s Blood (aka MOBY).  A bathysphere is a spherical chamber for deep diving.  Claire leaves a tense situation “breathing as if I’d just escaped from a bathysphere.”  This might just be my favourite Gabaldon word yet.

EXCRESCENCE- Claire uses it to describe the mob cap she’s been given by Granny Bacon in The Fiery Cross.  An excrescence is an outgrowth that’s the result of disease or abnormality, or an unattractive or superfluous addition.   I confess, this is a much milder definition than the one I had presumed.

DISQUISITION- This one came from a Facebook posting from Diana, but it’s also a humorous  article on her blog about “Butt-cooties.”  Disquisition is just a long word for ‘essay.’  As an English teacher, I will definitely be able to stick this one into my every day vocabulary!

INIMICAL- From Echo in the Bone.  It means tending to harm.  There was a strange sense of… “something waiting among the trees, not inimical, but not welcoming either.”

Click here to read a blog about CAMSTAIRY COCCYGODYNIANS.  Those are two of my favourite Gabaldon vocabulary words.  They’re from Drums of Autumn.

ABSQUATULATE- 29-01-13 Diana posted a Daily Line from MOBY (aka Written in My Own Heart’s Blood) with the following hashtag: #absquatulatemeansjustwhatyouthinkitdoes  The context is “He and Fraser had absquatulated onto the roof and down a drain-pipe, leaving William, clearly reeling with the shock of revelation, alone in the upstairs hallway.”  This word makes me laugh and shake my head.  It means to leave quickly.  To be honest, I was imagining from the context that it meant climb or clamber.  So, Diana, you were wrong.  It doesn’t mean just what I thought it did!

OLEAGINOUS- 04-04-2014 Diana posted a daily line from MOBY that said the surface of the butter was oleaginous.  i.e. greasy.  I like that this word can also mean obsequious.  I would have thought that was a satisfying enough option, but oleaginous is just so much better.  The butter was literally oleaginous, unlike pandering underlings.  Someday I’m using this word in a story. 🙂

SOUGH 14-07-2016 Daily line from book 9 Go Tell the Bees That I Am Gone (aka GOBEE): “Together they stood listening, trying to still their pounding hearts and gasping breaths long enough to hear anything above the sough of the forest.”  Sough means moaning, rustling, or murmuring sound.  It rhymes with ‘cough.’

BEDIZENED 08-06-2017 Daily line from book 9 Go Tell the Bees That I Am Gone (aka GOBEE):“For Angelina, unable or unwilling to bend her bedizened head enough to look down, was about to collide with the little platform on which the sitter’s chair was perched.”  Bedizened means dressed up or decorated gaudily.  Sounds like a lot of grad hair do’s we see this time of year.

FROWARD 2018-07-23 Daily line from book 9 Go Tell the Bees That I Am Gone (aka GOBEE): “He’s Scottish,” I amended, with a sigh. “Which means stubborn. Also unreasonable, intolerant, contumelious, froward, pig-headed and a few other objectionable things.”  Dictionary says this is someone who is contrary and difficult to deal with.

CONTUMELIOUS 2018-07-23 Daily line from book 9 Go Tell the Bees That I Am Gone (aka GOBEE): “He’s Scottish,” I amended, with a sigh. “Which means stubborn. Also unreasonable, intolerant, contumelious, froward, pig-headed and a few other objectionable things.”  Dictionary says this refers to someone’s behaviour as being insulting and objectionable.

AMBSACE 2018-07-23 Daily line from book 9 Go Tell the Bees That I Am Gone (aka GOBEE): 

“Men don’t like to share a woman. Unless it’s an ambsace.”
“An ambsace?” I was beginning to wonder how I might extricate myself from this conversation with any sort of dignity. I was also beginning to feel rather alarmed.
“That’s just what Madge called it. When two men want to do things to a girl at the same time. It costs more than it would to have two girls, because they often damage her. Mostly just bruises,” she added fairly. “But still.”

By definition, ambsace is the ‘lowest roll in a game of dice: 2 ones’.  See above for the vernacular meaning in the 1700s!

COUNTENANCE Posted by Diana Sept 30, 2023. A daily line from book 10 in progress:

William is pondering life after shaving in Jamie’s room at Fraser’s Ridge. “The thought made him feel more settled in himself. No matter what the future held, he still had both a past and a present, and those must be sufficient to keep him in countenance for what might come.”

The definition I know of countenance is ‘face’ but here Diana uses a less common definition, that of ‘support.’

 

I Heart You, You Haunt Me June 1, 2012

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My review of I Heart You, You Haunt Me by Lisa Schroeder, in verse.  Of course.

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A verse novel

is like dessert.

Not double chocolate fudge cake

or creme brulee.

More like

lime jello

or

custard.

You want to love it

because it’s dessert,

but somehow

 it doesn’t quite satisfy.

There’s a lack of depth here.

The message is simple

and the path is straight.

Apparently,

I like more

complexity

in relationships

and characters.

More conflict.

Something

more.

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Lest you think I’m just negative toward all verse novels, here’s my review of Wendy Phillip’s Fishtailing, which I thoroughly enjoyed.

 

passive power May 2, 2012

Filed under: Grace Awakening,Reading,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 3:28 pm

Sometimes, just being is powerful.

I remember when I was in grade eleven, one of our graduating students, Randy Lawrence, won a play writing competition with a play entitled, “Don’t Just Do Something, Stand There!”  It’s a clever twist on the epigram, “Don’t just stand there, do something!”   It’s not true that any action is better than inaction.  As Lawrence suggests in this title, sometimes, it the best course of action to wait patiently.

In fiction, a passive character is a boring character.  Critics tend to like “strong characters” and it is certainly true that a character prone to doing ‘something’  (when perhaps ‘standing’ is the better idea) will get himself into far more interesting adventures.  I understand that.

There’s been the odd reviewer who finds Grace excessively passive.   It’s certainly true that Grace receives action and is forced to react more than she instigates action.  She is not the feisty heroine who’s out to put all wrongs right right from the very beginning.  She is a quiet person who just wants a peaceful existence.  Truth be told, she should be a boring person.  She’d love to be a boring person, with boring experiences to recount.  Unfortunately, there are those who won’t let her have her boring life.  She is forced to deal with the destiny she has been given, just like the rest of us.

So she’s not actively pursuing her destiny.  To be honest, this makes her like 95% of the people I know, 90% of the time.  Occasionally things shake us up, but most of the time, we don’t set ourselves up for much excitement.  We make good choices.  We play it safe.  We survive to live another day.

Like us, Grace isn’t an adventure seeker.  She’s a victim of circumstance, though.  Grace has to learn why things are always ‘happening to her’ before she can face it down.  She spends some time grumbling about it. You know people like that, don’t you?  The ones who whine that their life is so unfair.  You can usually point to the flaw in their character or the specific choice that led them into their circumstance.  That’s the lesson that Grace (and the reader) has to learn.  We are the one common denominator in all our life experiences.  We carry our hamartia.  So whether we ‘deserve’ our fate or not, some essence of our being has often led to it.  We  are still an element of it.  Like Grace, our passivity may be our power, but sooner or later, it must be resolved.

When I crafted Grace, I wanted the reader to identify with her.  I wanted them to share in her confusion, and imagine themselves in her experiences.  That’s the reason there is no physical description of Grace anywhere.  When I ask readers how they visualize Grace, they invariably describe a version of themselves.  Most of the students I know have outside forces controlling their lives.  Parents, schools, and/or teams govern their time and responsibilities.  They can relate to Grace receiving action, rather than causing it, and they’re the ones I wrote for.

Josh says it best, “Be.”

 

star dust March 11, 2012

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“The secret has been within you since the day you were born.  We are all children of the stars–everything is.”

Martin and Carranza in The Gaudi Key

Where did I read that this is literally true?  Our nature as “carbon based life forms” shows that genetically we are full of star dust.  Crazy, isn’t it?  What secret is within us when we emerge bloody from the womb, open to the infinite possibility that is life itself?  What secret waits to tell us our purpose or destiny?  What is yours?