Shawn L. Bird

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poem- creak December 14, 2017

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:52 am
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Creak

Cracks

Broken

Backs

Strung on a rack

Creaking wheel

pulls spine taut

Entreats,

“Sweet mercy!”

Greets pain

Back

broken

cracks

creak.

 

4 Responses to “poem- creak”

  1. Jay Pines Says:
    December 14, 2017 at 11:00 am

    Great one… anyone with back pain can relate!

    Reply
  2. righteousbruin9 Says:
    December 14, 2017 at 3:20 pm

    Deep squats,
    Keep back taut.

    Reply

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