Shawn L. Bird

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poem- humming April 12, 2017

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:43 am
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I feel your humming.

Though you are far,

the vibrations of your present loss


I am humming

remembering you




wrapped around

my memories

squeezing like

a garbage compactor


as it crushes

moments into




8 Responses to “poem- humming”

  1. Rashmi Bhura Says:

    Beautifully written..

  2. jackcollier7 Says:

    cool, I love this mmmmmmmmmmm ❤

  3. ReVitellect Says:

    Love the use of the garbage compactor imagery. Catches you by surprise but relays the uncomfortable & undesirable nature of the situation well.

    The part about memories squeezing can be felt physically as a hug. Good stuff. Thanks for writing.

  4. As always, such a beautiful remembrance!

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