Shawn L. Bird

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poem-naming January 7, 2016

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:18 am
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In throes of passion

he never screams her name

and she wonders whether

he is ravishing secret loves

in his mind.

 

11 Responses to “poem-naming”

  1. howardat58's avatar howardat58 Says:

    “What do I think?” I think that there’s only one throe of passion here.

  2. jflint82's avatar Jarrod C Says:

    Very intriguing! Is an empty mind worse than a deceiving one?

  3. simono1968's avatar simono1968 Says:

    hmmmmm, a silence is golden moment perhaps! or could it be that some lovers would prefer the whisper of their lovers name in tender moments . . . or, like most men, two things at once??? are you crazy, i cant remember my own name in such moments ๐Ÿ˜‰ lol


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