poem-waving

poem-waving September 20, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:33 am
Tags: alliteration, imagery, personification, poem, poetry, storm, wind

Between the slats of the Venetian blinds,

I see outside the window, to frenzied frolicking

blue spruce bouncing

pine tree pirouetting

maple making waves

beneath a grey sky

dancing in time to my wind chime’s tune.

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18 Responses to “poem-waving”

Melody J Haislip Says:
September 20, 2015 at 11:38 am
I see it, too!

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  September 20, 2015 at 11:48 am
  🙂
  Excellent! Mission accomplished!
  
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jensenempire2551 Says:
September 20, 2015 at 11:43 am
Your so luck Mrs. Bird…

How the start of the new school year, and the kids?

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  September 20, 2015 at 11:47 am
  We’re off to a great start. My first course is poetry, which of course is the most fun for me!
  
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  - jensenempire2551 Says:
    September 20, 2015 at 5:51 pm
    of course, you so good at poetry, well from what i have read..
  - Shawn L. Bird Says:
    September 20, 2015 at 9:09 pm
    Thanks
ramexa Says:
September 20, 2015 at 11:53 am
Such an amazing descriptive poem! 😀

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  September 20, 2015 at 9:11 pm
  Thank you, Ramexa. I appreciate you stopping by.
  
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  - ramexa Says:
    September 20, 2015 at 10:15 pm
    Anytime! 🙂
righteousbruin9 Says:
September 20, 2015 at 2:38 pm
Dance of the Trees! As long as none of them stumble, it’s all good.

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  September 20, 2015 at 9:10 pm
  In this wind, there’s risk of that. I suspect the trees across the street could make a dint in our roof, but so far they’ve been staying put.
  
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Dorinda Duclos Says:
September 21, 2015 at 11:55 am
My favorite part of the Fall months…the breeze playing the wind chimes. Lovely poem, Shawn 🙂

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  September 21, 2015 at 8:11 pm
  They were quite raucous yesterday!
  Aiming for pentatonic Jimi Hendrix or something
  
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  - Dorinda Duclos Says:
    September 21, 2015 at 8:20 pm
    Sounds grand! Add a few more!
  - Shawn L. Bird Says:
    September 21, 2015 at 8:43 pm
    🙂 Neighbours might not appreciate it.
hooklineandinkwell Says:
September 21, 2015 at 8:23 pm
what a gorgeous dance of nature, enjoyed through the slats of a blind :)…well-done

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  September 21, 2015 at 8:42 pm
  Thank you. I’m glad you stopped in!
  
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  - hooklineandinkwell Says:
    September 21, 2015 at 8:43 pm
    as am I…you are welcome 🙂