haiku- melted

haiku- melted July 5, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:33 am
Tags: haiku, hort, ice cream, poem, poetry, simile, summer

Like an ice cream puddle

on pavement, beside an

empty cone, I melt.

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18 Responses to “haiku- melted”

colonialist Says:
July 5, 2015 at 12:55 pm
But there is no waste
A grateful dog eats the cone
And then licks you upl

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 5, 2015 at 2:42 pm
  Then the dog has
  explosive diarrhea. Lactose
  intolerance sucks.
  
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  - colonialist Says:
    July 5, 2015 at 2:59 pm
    Some dogs we’ve had suck lactose at any opportunity and don’t display intolerance at all!
  - Shawn L. Bird Says:
    July 5, 2015 at 3:24 pm
    lol
atimetoshare Says:
July 5, 2015 at 1:12 pm
Me too!

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 5, 2015 at 2:40 pm
  Sooooooo hot!
  
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  - atimetoshare Says:
    July 5, 2015 at 2:48 pm
    It’s in the low 90s in Minnesota, which is like 120 in Arizona. We went from 60s to this in just a few weeks? But then in a couple months we’ll be complaining about how cold it is.
  - Shawn L. Bird Says:
    July 5, 2015 at 3:28 pm
    It’s low 90s on my thermometer in the shade on my back porch at the moment. Lots of forest fires around, too.
blonde vampire Says:
July 5, 2015 at 1:37 pm
Reblogged this on blonde vampire.

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hobounivercity Says:
July 5, 2015 at 2:03 pm
it is soo hot!! Ms Shawn i ain’y wrote a haiku in ages….so i penned this fer your class

This is Amazing
Grace! i lost my mind, this day.
Gave it to Jesus

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 5, 2015 at 2:39 pm
  Mind, body, spirit
  Consecration is obligation:
  Love everyone
  
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migueltio Says:
July 5, 2015 at 3:51 pm
This feeds my sensitivities too! I melt like this so easily! Love this!!

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 5, 2015 at 4:36 pm
  🙂
  
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sumyanna Says:
July 6, 2015 at 1:21 pm
I hope you don’t mind . . . I nominated your blog for an award.

https://butterflykisseswatermelonwishes.wordpress.com/2015/07/06/recognition-the-versatile-blogger-award/

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 6, 2015 at 7:06 pm
  That’s very kind of you; however, as per my Blog Award Policy posted above, I decline. 🙂
  
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  - sumyanna Says:
    July 6, 2015 at 7:47 pm
    Totally understand but hope you don’t mind I thought of you today! I really have enjoyed your blog. Is it okay if I still keep the link up?
  - Shawn L. Bird Says:
    July 6, 2015 at 8:36 pm
    Sure
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