Shawn L. Bird

14 Responses to “poem- ache”

1. T.R. Sanders Says:

   February 20, 2015 at 7:46 am

   Excellent play on words! If I study your poetry long enough, I SHALL unlock the secret of how you express so much with such an economy of words.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     February 20, 2015 at 11:45 am

     I haven’t figured it out, so let me know if you do, okay? 😉

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2. Laura Says:

   February 20, 2015 at 7:52 am

   great play on the letter “I”. A short but very memorable poem.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     February 20, 2015 at 11:45 am

     Thanks, Laura. 🙂 I like playing with the assonance.

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3. Heartafire Says:

   February 20, 2015 at 8:06 am

   There’s a lot of emotion between these lines…beautifully expressed.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     February 20, 2015 at 11:44 am

     Thank you, Hollie.

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4. RawMultimedia Says:

   February 20, 2015 at 4:58 pm

   Reblogged this on Real Life, Creative & Unscripted.

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5. righteousbruin9 Says:

   February 20, 2015 at 9:05 pm

   Sighs are an outward path, for vulnerability.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     February 20, 2015 at 10:43 pm

     Oooh. I like that thought.

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6. dpnoble Says:

   February 21, 2015 at 10:51 am

   You’ve done it again! The apparent ease with which you marry assonance with brevity creates deep thought in your readers mind. In my mind for sure. When will we see an anthology in the bookstores?

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     February 21, 2015 at 5:57 pm

     There is an anthology for sale (see my books for sale page). With the ISBN you can order it from your friendly neighbourhood book store, if you prefer.

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     • dpnoble Says:

       February 22, 2015 at 1:33 am

       Great! How could I have missed that?!
7. Jimmy Lem Says:

   February 21, 2015 at 2:06 pm

   Great!

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     February 21, 2015 at 5:55 pm

     Thanks

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