Quiet crept
through rustling leaves,
soft snowfall.
Quiet crept
through murmurs heard
under our hearts.
Quiet crept
through gentle touches
sweet sighs.
Quiet crept
through me
to you.
Quiet crept
through rustling leaves,
soft snowfall.
Quiet crept
through murmurs heard
under our hearts.
Quiet crept
through gentle touches
sweet sighs.
Quiet crept
through me
to you.
love the imagery and feelings conveyed through your words, well done 🙂
Thank you.
Awe
Thanks, Chris.
Reblogged this on Gabriel Karam.
Nice use of the repeating line, brings out the differences in the references. I like it.
Jim
Thanks, Jim.
Very beautiful!
Thank you.
Quiet creeps deeply, just as it runs, when in liquid form.
🙂
Another beautiful poems. You are an amazingly talented poet.
Thank you, Kevin.
Let’s hope the publishers on my list feel that way. In the next few weeks I hope to get a couple of collections off in various directions to see if they can find homes. Wish me luck!
You won’t need luck you are that good but my best wishes any way!
Ahhhhhh…
(blushes)
Beautiful words Shawn
Thank you.
So nicely, quietly conveyed.
Thank you.
I appreciate you stopping by and taking the time to comment.
beautiful…
Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.