Shawn L. Bird

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poem-lake music August 17, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:49 pm
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A Salmon Arm Roots & Blues Festival poem


They’re dancing at the main stage

Melodies entwining in their hair

Pulses beating with the rhythm

of the musicians everywhere.



6 Responses to “poem-lake music”

  1. Sounds really cool and fun. My favorite Seasonal music is Antonio Vivaldi’s “The Four Seasons”

  2. Thanks for your ‘like’ today on my blog – it meant a lot on this occasion, as I noticed as soon as I’d posted, that my tanka had one extra syllable. But you’d already ‘liked’ it, which saved me worrying about that extra syllable! Otherwise I’d almost certainly have rewritten the whole poem. I realise the subject of my tanka being education, this must be something you think about constantly. I’m flattered that a teacher values my thoughts on education! 🙂

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