Shawn L. Bird

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poem-migraine August 3, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 3:21 pm
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Claws in the hall,

a staccato jack hammer,

burrow into my brain.

The A/C unit

roars and reverberates

in my skull.

Dull morning light

pierces through my eyelids

burning like a laser.

A storm roils

in my stomach washing up waves of

star studded agony.

Heat washes over, steam rises.

A freezing blizzard follows.

Desperately I seek

the peaceful

oblivion of sleep.

.

.

.

(Not having a good day!)

 

51 Responses to “poem-migraine”

  1. Those are so brutal. I don’t even know how you posted. I hope it lets up soon.

  2. johncoyote's avatar johncoyote Says:

    I had minor migraine years ago. Doctor gave me drugs. I went to the internet. It told me one quart of cranberry juice the first three days and than two glasses daily. I did it and I don;’t have them. The cranberry juice is the polite cleaner for the body. I do the rosemary tea. Good to relax the mind and body. I hope you are feeling better.

  3. Migraines are hell on earth. Sending you thoughts of healing quickly.

  4. macjam47's avatar macjam47 Says:

    Hope your feeling better SOON!

  5. Geo Sans's avatar Geo Sans Says:

    take care
    ~
    migraines … ahhh !!!

  6. Hope you recover quickly!

  7. Cheryl Ruffing's avatar Cheryl Says:

    Great poem, but I’m sorry about the inspiration for it. Have you figured out what causes your migraines? Often, it’s a food allergy/sensitivity, like gluten. This article might help: http://drhyman.com/blog/2010/05/18/how-to-end-migraines/#close

  8. chris jensen's avatar jensenempire2551 Says:

    Deep, deep in a cold
    silence without any sound,
    not a shiver of light
    where nothing can be found,
    reaching up through the seams
    losing touch within memories
    and dreams.

  9. wonkywizard's avatar wonkywizard Says:

    You suffered almost all the features of migraine. Hope these attacks do not recur too frequently. Rest more, for stress is a contributing factor.

  10. I don’t know these personally, but I surely know headaches. If those can be debilitating, what you go through must be awful. Best. And thank you for being so lucid during the killers.

    • I wasn’t very lucid in the heart of it, I can assure you. I wouldn’t have been able to look at a screen, or type. However, in the midst my agony I was thinking, “What do those dog nails sound like” etc, formulating the poem! (That’s dedication!) 😉

      I am still out of sorts, but my head feels much clearer. Thanks for the sympathy.

  11. Meredith's avatar Meredith Says:

    Knock on wood I haven’t had one in years. And I know how it makes you feel, like you’re dying.

  12. RoSy's avatar RoSy Says:

    UGH – I know that feeling all to well.
    Hope you feel better soon.
    Migraines really suck!

  13. beckyg1003's avatar beckyg1003 Says:

    Migraines are incredibly painful. I have had my share of them and they hurt and pound to the point that I just can’t function. I hope you recover soon. You’re terrific at describing the awful pain of it.

  14. Shelly Tennyson Taylor's avatar Shelly Tennyson Taylor Says:

    I hope you feel better soon! Glad to say I don’t have migraines but my cousin does and I see how they knock her down. I don’t wish that on anyone!

    • I don’t get them often, but when they hit, the whole world shrinks into a swirling mass of agony inside my head. Well. You can read how it was! I have a friend who gets them every month and they knock her out for a couple of days. She used to go in to teach even in pain. Can you imagine teaching drama with a migraine? Eek.

  15. Lorien's avatar Lorien Says:

    I didn’t even read the title, and I was asking myself, “Gosh! Does she have a migraine?” I’m sending you healing thoughts from across the continent–heal, be well, take care of yourself! Have you tried an eye pillow? I make organic flax seed and lavender eye pillows, and I have found them to be incredibly helpful for headaches and muscle tension. How about some restorative yoga? I hope you feel better soon!

  16. davidprosser's avatar davidprosser Says:

    You have my sympathy Sweetie. I hope sleep helped it clear.
    xxx Massive Hugs xxx

  17. redsoxliz1980's avatar redsoxliz1980 Says:

    I get them too, so this really hits home for me. I feel your pain!

  18. Hope you’re feeling better….

  19. mooremorrans's avatar mooremorrans Says:

    You have done a fantastic job of putting into words the agony of a migraine so that those of us who have been fortunate enough NOT to have experienced them can glean some idea of what migraine sufferers experience. The words became so real I started getting a headache too! Now I have an idea of what my then-teenage daughter suffered and why she bought a baby bottle, had me fill it with warm cocoa and bring it to her in her darkened bedroom whenever she felt a migraine coming on. Somehow the warm, comforting sucking got her to sleep and through the worst of the headache. As I learned to say in Germany, “Gute Besserung!”

    • Thanks. They really are horrible.

      I have a friend with a spinal fluid issue who spent months in this agony while waiting for surgery (pressure of fluid squeezing the brain). I can’t imagine, though the pain behind her eyes made it a miracle she could even get out of the house.

  20. colonialist's avatar colonialist Says:

    I like the writing, not what gave rise to it!

  21. I feel your pain as my migraines, when bad, keep me in bed as well.


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