Shawn L. Bird

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poem- wind June 13, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:25 pm
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Change blows in

on the wind

on the sweet scent of honeysuckle

and the stinging tang of chicken manure

Sort the good from the bad,

and set your sail

to catch the breeze you need

for your new direction.

 

16 Responses to “poem- wind”

  1. Wonderful! I felt very much at home with the imagery.

  2. scifihammy's avatar scifihammy Says:

    Loved this! That fourth line is such a surprise – but so true!

  3. Melody J Haislip's avatar Melody J Haislip Says:

    Shawn, I like the way this one moves. I’ve always appreciated the link between manure and the beauty of roses.

  4. John S's avatar John S Says:

    You have been on a roll of late. Very inspiring poems!

  5. I’ll be aiming for honeysuckle today. So far so good.

  6. mezzyadamz's avatar mezzyadamz Says:

    Wow! What pictures you paint! I felt like going for a walk with the wind in my face.

  7. petescribes's avatar petescribes Says:

    Honeysuckle & chicken manure two scents from my childhood summers that evoke two very different memories.


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