Shawn L. Bird

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poem- snow falling March 2, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:38 pm
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Snow falling

a white world

Pure motives

clean character

Love calling

to warm bed

longing

laughing

falling.

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(This is my 1300th blog post!  Hurrah!)

 

 

25 Responses to “poem- snow falling”

  1. Chess Says:

    Beautifully penned.

  2. Renard Moreau Says:

    [ Smiles ] Lovely poem!

  3. clisawork Says:

    Watching the snow fall right now:-)

  4. davidprosser Says:

    Beautiful Shawn.
    xxx Huge Hugs xxx

  5. Kim13 Says:

    1300?? Omgosh…too cool, way to go! Beautiful thoughts and words as always..thanks! 🙂

  6. Brenda Says:

    Wonderful, loving acceptance of yet another snowstorm! You made me smile despite shoveling being in my future. And 1300!! Wow!!

    • Hubby said, “Tell me if you’re going out, so I can shovel before you leave.” I told him that I had no intention of going ANYWHERE today! I have enough jobs inside. I am in progress on shaving poodle feet- letting the clippers cool for the next go.

  7. JustDeb Says:

    Congrats on 1300! Love it! No snow today but when it’s here I have to walk in it.

  8. Congrats on being so industrious a blogger as well as a poet 🙂

  9. earthchanges Says:

    The first 1300 are the easiest:-) Can’t wait for the next 1300!

  10. Y. Prior Says:

    1300? wow – congrats
    and I took your poem from today – and made it into a congrats poem for you…. (hope this is okay to do – I know writing is personal – so it is all just in good fun) ok? – 😉

    your poem from this post:

    Snow falling
    a white world
    Pure motives
    clean character
    Love calling
    to warm bed
    longing
    laughing
    falling.

    My modified version of your poem as a congrats:

    Thoughts falling
    a rich world
    Pure Shawn Bird
    clever character
    Words calling
    to the key pad (1300th time)
    expounding
    sharing
    blessing

    ~y.


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