Shawn L. Bird

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haiku-hiding January 31, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:30 am
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Fence around our snowy

yard, bound by snow laden trees

Somewhere a white dog.

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He’s hiding in plain sight.  Where are you OJ?!  Good thing he always comes when I whistle for him!

 

12 Responses to “haiku-hiding”

  1. Ron's avatar pi314chron Says:

    Uber-nice! To see your white dog, put his food bowl out and call him. The part of your yard that shows up with a red tongue will be him! 🙂

    Ron

    • lol. Luckily he comes immediately when I whistle, but at night I can’t see him until he leaps onto the deck. In the summer, it’s his ‘brother’ the brown miniature poodle we can’t find in the yard at night. 🙂

  2. Hakeem's avatar hakeem Says:

    I really want to learn how to write a haiku. Nice one

  3. pilbra's avatar pilbra Says:

    Wonderful made me feel cool . The heat here in South Australia is becoming like a melting pot. Send you some warmth and send us some cool. Been over 40.0deg C too long now

    • We have hot summers, but rarely up to 40. My condolences! I hope your A/C works! Around here, it’s been hovering right around 0 for a month. Our houses are well built, so that’s very comfortable, and it’s very pretty after a fresh snow. Last weekend hubby drove 2.5 hours south, and road his bike around a lake. No snow at all down there.

  4. Pendryw's avatar Pendryw Says:

    Laughed out loud at this. Great imagery.

  5. hehe good luck with the search!


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