Shawn L. Bird

14 Responses to “poem- dream weaver”

1. Chess Says:

   October 12, 2013 at 10:49 pm

   “weft of hope”, gorgeous use of words!

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     October 12, 2013 at 11:49 pm

     Glad you like it.

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   • GiniClare Says:

     October 13, 2013 at 2:07 am

     I was just about to comment the same thing! Wonderful blend of words 🙂

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     • Shawn L. Bird Says:

       October 13, 2013 at 11:10 am

       Thanks
2. timthepoet Says:

   October 13, 2013 at 1:05 am

   Nicely done. I’m not sure if this is a particular type of poem or free verse.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     October 13, 2013 at 11:09 am

     Just a free verse, Tim. I imagined it a little more flowing, but this is what appeared, so it’s a very tight metaphor!

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3. Richard Summers Says:

   October 13, 2013 at 5:34 am

   profoundly simple…can’t wait to share this with a friend who weaves

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     October 13, 2013 at 11:09 am

     Thank you. I appreciate you sharing my work.

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4. lawsonsotherdog Says:

   October 14, 2013 at 12:09 am

   i like this very much

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     October 14, 2013 at 12:09 am

     I’m glad.

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     • lawsonsotherdog Says:

       October 14, 2013 at 12:10 am

       i like writing, sensitive….very good
     • Shawn L. Bird Says:

       October 14, 2013 at 12:48 am

       Thanks
5. releaf1954 Says:

   October 20, 2013 at 1:31 am

   I love this.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     October 20, 2013 at 1:45 am

     Thanks.

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