Shawn L. Bird

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poem- connected January 18, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:37 am
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In the day

they brush past one another,

utter essential words,

questions,

instruction.

But at night,

they brush against one another,

whisper non-essential words,

passions,

exhortation.

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15 Responses to “poem- connected”

  1. amoafowaa Says:

    Hypocrisy, if you ask me.

  2. dodgysurfer Says:

    I really like this. It evokes the imagination to think about the scenario, workplace? Illicit or practical? normal home life?… And the differentiation of purpose and meaning of the words that pass between in the two states is lovely.

  3. mihrank Says:

    you have such beautiful poem and inspirational!

  4. Michael33 Says:

    Good morning Shawn – Thanks for helping me to smile this morning. Great poetry with my first cup of coffee…
    Hope you have a beautiful day…
    Michael

  5. Jarrod C Says:

    Excellent work! 🙂

  6. So exquisite; so essential.

  7. My wife and I teach at the same school so this is perfect. Love it!


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