Shawn L. Bird

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haiku- on the journey August 8, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:23 pm
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Gentle jade waters

leap in frothy white tutus

and wear down mountains

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As I was driving to Calgary today over the Rockies, I passed all sorts of lovely waterfalls with the prettiest pale green water.  As I drove along, of course I composed a poem!

 

22 Responses to “haiku- on the journey”

  1. Nature provides endless sources of inspiration. All the Muses Love You and you Honor them Well!

  2. heather anne's avatar taehreh Says:

    completely lovely!! I’m driving to Victoria from Calgary tomorrow and am bringing my notebook in the hopes of doing the very same thing 🙂

  3. coconutspeak's avatar coconutspeak Says:

    I am happy for you and jealous at the same time. Love your haiku.

  4. Loved it! Made me smile coz I do exactly the same…as I walk, drive, cycle…

  5. Martha Pratt's avatar Martha Pratt Says:

    Lovely poem. Quite evocative

    On a side note, as you were driving to Calgary, did you see Sam Heughan broken down on the side of the road>

  6. Mike's avatar Mike Says:

    Perfect. Clever contrast metaphoric too.

  7. Ron's avatar pi314chron Says:

    Charming short verse. ** 🙂 **

  8. redgladiola's avatar redgladiola Says:

    I liked the unexpected imagery with white tutus. It made nature amusing and fun and not just placid and beautiful. =)

    • I know ballerinas, and they are such a paradox. When they dance, they look lighter than air, but they are tough, strong, and tenacious. (I’m thinking of you, if you’re out there, Melea!) Like water wears away stone, ballerinas are not what they seem!

  9. Love frothy whit tutus – delicious imagery.


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