You are illuminated cranberry glass
the glow of a molten sunset
the iridescence of hummingbird wings
You are the dance of kite strings
the song of a mockingbird
the quintessence of possibility
You are all I long to be
the dreams of a millennium
the hope of eternity
You are innocence in a cradle
the wisdom of the elders
the infinity of the finite.
You are bubbles of laughter
the effervescence of everything
the reason.

Wow. This is amazing.
Thank you.
Shucks! I didn’t realize you knew me that well!!! A lovely poem thanks.
lol Thank you Brieuse! (That’s a marvellous name, by the way).
Favorite phrase: “the effervescence of everything.” Favorite image: “the dance of kite strings.” Lovely!
Glad you liked it.
Deep within my latest writer’s block this lifted me, for which I thank you.
I’m glad to be of service!
This poem is very moving in several aspects. I really appreciate it.
Thank you. That’s kind of you to say.
Beautiful poem indeed, Shawn: “(…)the quintessence of possibility (…)” Great!
Congratulations! 🙂
Cheers,
Rafael
Thanks
This is beautiful. I especially love the image of ‘the iridescence of hummingbird wings’ – so powerful.
Glad you liked it
A beautifully constructed poem. It begins with original vivid images and then reaches beyond “the horizon” of common utterance like pure poetry does.
Thank you!
I love this! 🙂
Thank you.
lovely…especially liked: You are bubbles of laughter
the effervescence of everything
the reason.
Thank you.