Shawn L. Bird

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poem- you July 29, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:29 pm
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You are illuminated cranberry glass

the glow of a molten sunset

the iridescence of hummingbird wings

You are the dance of kite strings

the song of a mockingbird

the quintessence of possibility

You are all I long to be

the dreams of a millennium

the hope of eternity

You are innocence in a cradle

the wisdom of the elders

the infinity of the finite.

You are bubbles of laughter

the effervescence of everything

the reason.

 

 

20 Responses to “poem- you”

  1. ms_Lee_yah's avatar apringle8 Says:

    Wow. This is amazing.

  2. Bruce Goodman's avatar Brieuse Bernhard Piers-Gûdmönd Says:

    Shucks! I didn’t realize you knew me that well!!! A lovely poem thanks.

  3. Favorite phrase: “the effervescence of everything.” Favorite image: “the dance of kite strings.” Lovely!

  4. E.B.'s avatar NigelG Says:

    Deep within my latest writer’s block this lifted me, for which I thank you.

  5. coconutspeak's avatar coconutspeak Says:

    This poem is very moving in several aspects. I really appreciate it.

  6. rafaelpradov's avatar rafaelpradov Says:

    Beautiful poem indeed, Shawn: “(…)the quintessence of possibility (…)” Great!

    Congratulations! 🙂
    Cheers,
    Rafael

  7. This is beautiful. I especially love the image of ‘the iridescence of hummingbird wings’ – so powerful.

  8. Laurie Keim's avatar Laurie Keim Says:

    A beautifully constructed poem. It begins with original vivid images and then reaches beyond “the horizon” of common utterance like pure poetry does.

  9. jinnykoh's avatar jinnykoh Says:

    I love this! 🙂

  10. lovely…especially liked: You are bubbles of laughter
    the effervescence of everything
    the reason.


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