Shawn L. Bird

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from the owl to the lark July 5, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 3:31 pm
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As long as

I desire you at bedtime

and you desire me upon waking,

I think it will work out.

 

30 Responses to “from the owl to the lark”

  1. Charles Yallowitz's avatar Charles Yallowitz Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 3:40 pm

    Very romantic and reminds me of couples that work opposing hours.

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  2. Michael's avatar summerstommy2 Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 3:43 pm

    That’s a lovely sentiment Shawn. Something we all long for.

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  3. kabirgandhiok's avatar kabirgandhiok Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 3:44 pm

    Nicely put! 🙂

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  4. Ronald Joseph Kule, Biographer/Novelist/Ghostwriter's avatar Ronald Joseph Kule Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 4:12 pm

    simple is powerful:
    under covers only dark
    yet candlelight illuminates curves
    liquid treasures to follow

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  5. Catherine Johnson's avatar Catherine Johnson Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 4:24 pm

    Lovely!

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  6. villaligno's avatar SprinklinThoughts Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 4:48 pm

    Sounds like a “Golden Rule”… a good one 🙂

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  7. Chagall's avatar Chagall Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 7:18 pm

    So, back to back, so to speak, night and morning? Maybe a box lunch? 🙂 —–Chagall

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  8. russellboyle's avatar russellboyle Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 7:23 pm

    I think so, too!

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  9. Shawn's avatar roadsideweeds Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 7:32 pm

    love this poem…thank you for your like…my name is Shawn too!

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  10. pilbra's avatar Bee Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 9:19 pm

    Your work has inspired me to keep on trying and writing please accept this award http://barbmca.wordpress.com/2013/07/06/very-inspiring-blogger-award/

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  11. quarksire's avatar quarksire Says:
    July 5, 2013 at 9:30 pm

    Happy Birthday Birdlady!….~*(*@*@*)*~~~~~if ur b/day is anything like ur poem …will prolly be a gewd one:)……kewl 1….Q

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  12. Jon Petruschke's avatar Jon Petruschke Says:
    July 6, 2013 at 7:43 am

    I love this! Great!

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