‘Neath Cold night stars
that come undone
they glow afar
new life begun.
Breathe, you’re alive!
Ignore the scars
Rain washes sighs
making time ours
new life begun
‘neath cold night stars.
‘Neath Cold night stars
that come undone
they glow afar
new life begun.
Breathe, you’re alive!
Ignore the scars
Rain washes sighs
making time ours
new life begun
‘neath cold night stars.
This is a GREAT poem! I have been reading through some this morning on the WP reader that are so,”Depressing!” Some of the others are someones attempt to prove they have BIG vocabulary. This poem is simple and beautiful.
I’ve posted a few depressing ones this week as I sort through a murder suicide event, but after a while one needs to change focus! Thanks for the compliment.
Sorry to hear about that. I have seen a lot of those on T.V. lately. It’s so sad! If only more people knew God loves them, no matter how bad things get.
Or that where there is life, there is hope, at least.
Amen! 🙂
I like the up-lifting move-on message, nice, very nice indeed.
there is hope
small pin-holes of light
in every darkness
Having lived long enough to have borne a reasonable amount of scars, I found that analogy most practical to the message to overcome, endure, and move on. Nice piece of work.
Thanks.
Very soothing, beautiful!
Top poem!
Thanks.